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Beautiful Thing: Chapter Seven

Jul 24, 2009 13:14

Story: Beautiful Thing

Chapter Seven: Footsteps In The Sand

Author: mayberry_rose

Characters: Albus Severus/Scorpius

Rating: PG-13ish

Prompts used: All of them :)

Word count: ~2500

Warnings: Language, sickness, boy love

Summary: Al is ill, and Score is frantic, and vital things are - almost - learned.

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rating: pg-13, fic

Comments 8

asnowyowl July 24 2009, 13:08:26 UTC

Wonderful chapter. I love how Scorpius is so worried for Al and how he just wants to be able to do something for him. You made his anxiety palpable.

mayberry_rose July 26 2009, 20:27:54 UTC

Aw, thank you so much :D
Glad you liked :)

remuslives23 July 24 2009, 13:46:14 UTC

Fantastic chappie! Scorpius taking care of Al is just so sweet! *hugs them*

mayberry_rose July 26 2009, 20:28:24 UTC

Yay, thank you so much!
*Pokes them until they hug you back*
:D

phys_nut July 24 2009, 17:37:51 UTC

AWWWWW!! *glomps scorpius* poor scorp! i got totally caught up in his panick and everything, i'm so glad that albus is okay and all! and the flowers were such a sweet gift and OMG the kiss from albus at the end!! kawaii!!

mayberry_rose July 26 2009, 20:29:54 UTC

Aw, thank you :D
I'm glad you thought the flowers were more sweet than trampy! Heh, thanks :)
More of that to come ;D

phoenix_xd July 25 2009, 01:23:26 UTC

oh, this is so sweet :)

mayberry_rose July 26 2009, 20:15:34 UTC

Thank-you :)