::bends all her attention in Mrs. Just's direction::
"It's... Kagome did something stupid." ::chuckling::
I'd say this is a promising start... Seven Days, eh? I'm gonna venture a guess that Mr. Last Resort encounters an unexpected snag? ::twinkle::
Backstory-wise, I'm a little fuzzy on why Sess owes Inu... and Rin's absence is glossed over rather quickly. I'm also curious what Sesshoumaru brings to the table that can exceed the Red Tetsusaiga's barrier-breaking capabilities.
I like the combative language the brothers use with one another... and the way the agreement they reach is tentative at best. ::chuckles:: The fact that Sesshoumaru assumes his own success but questions the girl's likelihood of survival has that touch of wry humor I've come to expect and love from you!
Your teaser indeed teases. I would like to read more! ~forth
I'm so excited
anonymous
June 3 2007, 08:36:03 UTC
I can't believe it! You're writing another Sesshoumaru-Kagome fic. I can't wait to read it already and the teaser is just making me more eager. It sounds really promising so far. I can't say I've read anything that sounded like that, i.e. Inuyasha asking Sesshoumaru to help Kagome, elsewhere. As always, beautiful characterisation of Sesshoumaru and I can't wait to see this posted!!
I think you have me already. (I really need to keep up with my f-list) It sounds so smooth coming out - almost like you have the entire thing written already. Do you? Stop holding back!
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"It's... Kagome did something stupid." ::chuckling::
I'd say this is a promising start... Seven Days, eh? I'm gonna venture a guess that Mr. Last Resort encounters an unexpected snag? ::twinkle::
Backstory-wise, I'm a little fuzzy on why Sess owes Inu... and Rin's absence is glossed over rather quickly. I'm also curious what Sesshoumaru brings to the table that can exceed the Red Tetsusaiga's barrier-breaking capabilities.
I like the combative language the brothers use with one another... and the way the agreement they reach is tentative at best. ::chuckles:: The fact that Sesshoumaru assumes his own success but questions the girl's likelihood of survival has that touch of wry humor I've come to expect and love from you!
Your teaser indeed teases. I would like to read more!
~forth
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