*FIC: Beauty*

[asterie_smiles]

DARK! DARK! DARK! DARK!

Beauty
by S_Star

Disclaimer: If Rowling knew what I was doing to her creations in this little fic, my head would probably be on a pike outside the gates to her mansion. We can deduce from this that I am not Rowling and do not own the characters. Or the mansion.
Pairing: H/D
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Sex, blood and a

Comments

[shadafakup]

Nonononono. It wasn't twisted - it was prefection.

Dearie, I LOVED this. *cough* but yeah, it was like omgomgomgomgomg.

I don't know, but somehow the paragraph length really struck me. I mean, it was short, then it got longer and longer, and then there was this abrupt two lines, and it ended in that one word. Maybe I was just over-thinking but yeah. It seemed to have significance. As Draco grew more psychotic, the words seem to tumble over wonderfully.

*shivers* I loved the whole feel of it, the whole sound of it, and the way it flowed. It was like falling into this spiral of the darkess emotions that plague us, even as we don't notice.

Cutting out the dark mark. My god, I loved that bit. The insanity of both boys were wonderfully done.

"fucks him gently for the first time before obsessively arranging him on the scarlet sheets, his torso a masterpiece in itself with lines and bruises that don’t heal and all the colours of his lust, his obsession."

I adored that line. It was well crafted I was specchless

[asterie_smiles]

*huggles* Thank you SO, SO much! Your reviews always amaze me so much, they're so lovely and so insightful! Thank you!

[asterie_smiles]

0_0 Sweetie, I gotta say, this is probably the longest and best review I've ever had. ^_~

Thank you a hundred thousand times, you have no idea how much your words mean to me. *huggles*

[asterie_smiles]

YAY! *is saviour of slash AND has cookies* lol, that makes me feel all fuzzy inside! And the cookies really are delicious... *begs for more as a b-day gift*

[babydyke1319]

I can't help but come back to this story every so often. I just...I'm not syre what it is that draws me back, aside from all the fabulous comments you've gotten already. I think the first time I read this, it clicked in place, and each time I read it again it just grinds away, getting rid of all the last tiny pieces of hope I have about this not being the only ending to any relationship they could have. I read this and, not so much my H/D ship went out the window, but I knew that any ending I could every fathom wouldn't do justice to what they have, and what you gavethem. Did that make sense?

[asterie_smiles]

It made sense and it blew me away! ^_^ I'm amazed that my li'l fic made such an impression on you, thank you!

Dark and Lovely

[xtreme17nc13]

That was beautiful in the darkest kind of way. It was just like...whoa. The ending was amazing. So twisted, so dark, so lovely. I got shivers the entire time I was reading it. Somehow, the entire thing made perfect sense to me. That means one of two thing. 1. You're a wonderful writer; or 2. I'm finally going insane. I'm betting on both. Yet again, lovely. Toodlez! --Ashlee

Re: Dark and Lovely

[asterie_smiles]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. And dw about the insane thing, I think I must be pretty crazy to have written something so twisted in the first place. ^_~

[kurla88]

Ouch. Ouchouch.

[asterie_smiles]

I'll take that as a compliment... ^_~ Thanks for reading!