Comments | astimegoesby: Editing my brother's essay.

astimegoesby

Editing my brother's essay.

Oct 09, 2005 22:54

The cavemen were hunting. They were stalking their prey, a bison. They silently followed it, but then it started to rain. The bison ran away. They missed their chance. It also began to thunder. The thunder struck one of them. Only 5 of them remained standing. They did not find the dead body till raining ceased. They sadly buried him. One of them ( Read more... )

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ileviyou October 10 2005, 08:05:16 UTC

hahahahhhahhahhhahaa

ileviyou October 10 2005, 08:05:39 UTC

sometimes i find myself liking your brothers

astimegoesby October 11 2005, 10:32:46 UTC

haha me too.

...I like them more than my mom. +!

destradobsidian October 10 2005, 22:08:19 UTC

Sadly, that is better than my writing.

astimegoesby October 11 2005, 10:34:48 UTC

haha, it was a report on cavemen and my brother was told to "write a story"

so he decided to sum up the evolution of man in about...uh...4 days of life. Everyday one man died and they learned something (Berries were poisonous...you don't fight bears alone...or..ever.............)