Story....

[aston_splat]

Um yeah.

Here it is:

"The blue light on top and the red light on the bottom of the rivet-studded machine were off. That didn't mean much, since the very Heath Robinson contraption, in defiance of all physical laws, existed, but no one would see them anyway. There was no one except me around. So, if anyone else had been on the lonely farmroad next to

Comments

[nimnod]

Cool. Interesting style. I now wish to read other things you've written to determine whether said style is You or whether said style is intended specifically to evoke the particular feeling it achieves in this story. Also? Go you for writing! Yay! =)

[aston_splat]

This was an attempt to see how long I could go on for before resorting actually advancing the plot. It's not quite how I normally write. Ask Tally when she gets back online what I normally write like.

Will look for some other stuff though. ;)