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astormisbrewing

Why Mimes Don't Wear Stilettos

Mar 15, 2011 23:18

Title: Why Mimes Don’t Wear Stilettos
Genre: Crime Thriller
Pairing: KiHyuk
Rating: PG13
Summary: Kibum has been chasing this murderer for years. And he lands on his best bet at catching him by accident ( Read more... )

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cereal_strawz March 16 2011, 03:24:58 UTC

You try and make it sound so fun with your "Crossdressing mimes this way!"
BUT IT'S A LIE!

There is no more happy.

Poor Eunhyuk... nothing seems to be going well for him today.

astormisbrewing March 16 2011, 03:34:27 UTC

Nothing. At all. DX We'll make it up to him tomorrow.

Well. Sort of. My plans for tomorrow are evil, but decidedly less angst-ridden.

lady_hanaka March 16 2011, 03:26:14 UTC

It is Zhou Mi. Zhou Mi is the rapist/killer. He wants Kibum and he'll take out anyone who gets in his way, including helpless mimes.

Also...damn Zhou Mi can write fast! Look at him with his threats (and probably written in Hangul, he must have spent so long studying it to get it just right!). Or did he have that strategically written there before he shot Hyukkie? It doesn't matter.

Wonderful story as always. Yous is the best out of the three for the night. Well, who knows about Cereal's, but I assume yours still winds. We'll find out about hers tomorrow. XD

Also, the plushies look hella good with their taped on faces! XD

astormisbrewing March 16 2011, 03:36:45 UTC

You might find out if it's Zhou Mi. After this week. Because I'm not finishing it right now. But I will tell you this - Kibum isn't who the killer is after.

lady_hanaka March 16 2011, 03:44:58 UTC

Sure it's not Kibum. You keep telling yourself that Stormy.

astormisbrewing March 16 2011, 03:50:16 UTC

Hm, no, I'm quite sure. If Zhou Mi is the one killing the women, and he hs the shoe fetish, why isn't he taking the shoes, and who is doing the raping? Is it the pimple-faced intern? Is it Heechul? Donghae? Someone we haven't mentioned yet? Hyukjae himself might be in on it. You have no idea. I might not, either.

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rayneweather March 16 2011, 04:27:51 UTC

WAIT, WHAT?? THAT'S THE END???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *rips hair out in frustration* How could you kill Hyukkie??? Why can't they catch him?!! Oh, Heechul as the medical examiner was awesome. I loved your characterization of Donghae, too. But I can't believe you left it there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*demands a sequel* I'm going to plop myself down and camp out here until you write another one. *pouts*

Just kidding, it was just a very abrupt ending, one I wasn't expecting.

astormisbrewing March 16 2011, 12:41:22 UTC

Lol, well, I was daydreaming about writing a sequel. I always make Heechul a brainy person. Psychiatrist, political satirist, concert musician, medical examiner . . . he just lends himself to the quirks of the job. That, and I have a lot of respect for the man. :/ Odd way of showing it, maybe.

So thanks, overall. :) Abrupt endings make things interesting.

sujuhappiness March 16 2011, 05:01:19 UTC

OMG.... you weren't kidding when you said this story was going to be darker... god... the last scene... Hyukie... why... is he really and truly dead?

why do evil people have all the lucky shots and the good people hit random areas that don't end up eliminating the eeevil?

astormisbrewing March 16 2011, 12:44:56 UTC

Lol, the only thing I really haven't thought about with how it ends is whether or not Hyukie died. I know who did it, though. :D

Because good people are too good to want to use lethal force and bad people practice more. :P 'Good, Bad,' I like exploring these stereotypes. I like making people on the side of good that the idealists hate but who get the job done like an evil person. :D

ckat09 March 16 2011, 05:46:50 UTC

wait wait...
is that the end?? and...i really can't form a single sentence to say.
the ending is just horrific. did hyukjae die?
and..they hadn't even caught the killer yet!
i want to know who it is...is there a 2nd part? :P
well, i'm still hoping that there is!!
/waits

astormisbrewing March 16 2011, 12:47:45 UTC

Wow, I'm made someone speechless! That's the first time that's happened. This was actually the most fun to write . . . so there might be a sequel. No one is opposed to the idea, apparently, but we'll just have to see how it all works out with school.

I don't even know if Hyukjae is dead or not, though. But I do have a pretty good idea of who shot him. So . . . things too look forward to?