Picture Perfect 3/4

[astra_sequi]

Title: Picture Perfect
Pairing: Referenced Neal/Kate. Character focus on Neal and Peter. El and Moz make an appearance.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 13,146
Spoilers: Season 1 finale. A brief mention of a single conversation in season 2
Warnings: General angst. Neal being Neal.
Summary: Neal gets over Kate, only for her to show up again. Peter wants him to

Comments

[afiawri]

Another well-done foil with the Burke’s easy marriage and Neal and Kate’s relationship.
Neal and Peter’s banter over that file is spot on. (I transcribe episodes and stare at such banter for hours; I would know.)
The way you chose to express Neal’s complete inability to lie well around Peter is beautiful comedic relief with perfect timing.
I find it interesting, given the title, that it's a picture of Kate that really kicks the plot into high gear.

[astra_sequi]

Ah, you're last point is really interesting and true. I didn't even think realize it until you mentioned that. Way to be more insightful than I am. :D

[afiawri]

I always love it when my readers take away things from my story that I never meant to put there. Something of a buried treaasure thing. And this particular one was very enjoyable to find.