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astra_sequi

Picture Perfect 4/4

Sep 10, 2010 01:18

Title: Picture Perfect
Pairing: Referenced Neal/Kate. Character focus on Neal and Peter. El and Moz make an appearance.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 13,146
Spoilers: Season 1 finale. A brief mention of a single conversation in season 2
Warnings: General angst. Neal being Neal.
Summary: Neal gets over Kate, only for her to show up again. Peter wants him to ( Read more... )

fic, white collar, big bang

Comments 11

elrhiarhodan September 10 2010, 12:34:31 UTC

This is terrific!

I could feel Neal's deep conflict - the old comfort of his love for Kate battling with his growth as a human being.

Your characters and voices are pitch perfecr and very much in canon. A wonderful story worth reading over and over again.

astra_sequi September 13 2010, 01:02:42 UTC

It's great to hear the characters stay in character. It's kind of hard to do, especially for Kate (since WC gives us next to nothing about her). Thanks for reading. :D

secretsolitaire September 10 2010, 12:42:08 UTC

Aw, Neal! *hugs him* I enjoyed this. I could see how things had changed between Neal and Kate (mostly because of how Neal himself had changed), and I liked Peter giving him his mojo hat back at the end. :-)

astra_sequi September 13 2010, 01:06:16 UTC

Peter will always make sure Neal has his mojo/hat. :D Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.

micheleeeex September 10 2010, 14:09:10 UTC

i loved this :D

astra_sequi September 13 2010, 01:07:19 UTC

Happy to hear you enjoyed this. Cheers!

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astra_sequi September 13 2010, 01:15:12 UTC

I'm happy he decided not to run too. It's more fun when he's with Peter. :) Cheer! I'm happy you enjoyed the story.

afiawri September 12 2010, 15:55:52 UTC

Your poor Neal, trying to have his cake and eat it too ( ... )

astra_sequi September 13 2010, 01:27:08 UTC

It makes me so happy to hear that you've enjoyed this story so thoroughly. Your comments and insights are a pleasure to read, and it makes me feel more confident in my writing. Thanks so much for reading. Cheers!