Neptune Approves
anonymous
June 29 2013, 04:36:47 UTC
Sequel?
Sure. I like it, and I can surely say that it is a whole lot better than the other one. The dialogue is a lot stronger, and it seems more thought out rather than some last-minute, squeezed out "I gotta make this deadline really fast" sort of story. <3 *Betta*
Re: Neptune Approves
anonymous
June 29 2013, 18:51:04 UTC
*circles carefully and eyes the cookie before taking it. After a few thoughtful minutes of chewing, the indigo war-phish is content with the offering and nests alongside the writer.*
When will you be writing this new story? And how is it with your other site? I'll be needing a link to it so that I can plug you on my page.
Re: Neptune Approvesastral_alien8June 29 2013, 19:40:11 UTC
I'm not sure yet. I'm going to give it a little time, because right now I have absolutely no idea how to even go about doing the rehabilitation. I may just do snippets and imply the rest.
Oh! I don't even know how that's going yet, I just got it today. It only has this story so far, but I may add Check Mate to it too, and whatever other stories I may come up with, to include whatever spin-offs I do with this one. Here's the link...I think, anyway... http://archiveofourown.org/users/astral_alien8
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Sure. I like it, and I can surely say that it is a whole lot better than the other one. The dialogue is a lot stronger, and it seems more thought out rather than some last-minute, squeezed out "I gotta make this deadline really fast" sort of story.
<3
*Betta*
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Then again, it could be interestingly challenging to write in the rehab scenes...*ponders* I will need my betta again! *Offers cookie*
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When will you be writing this new story? And how is it with your other site? I'll be needing a link to it so that I can plug you on my page.
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Oh! I don't even know how that's going yet, I just got it today. It only has this story so far, but I may add Check Mate to it too, and whatever other stories I may come up with, to include whatever spin-offs I do with this one. Here's the link...I think, anyway... http://archiveofourown.org/users/astral_alien8
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