scissors and dirt. re: akame.

Jun 03, 2007 21:12

scissors and dirt.
akame. (with yamapi, tegoshi, shige, ryo, koichi, nagase appearance.)
1,862 words.
6½ pages.
soundtrack: assorted. some dark instrumentals.

“It’s for safety.” Pi said, signaling with two of his fingers pressed tightly together into a single bar. “You wouldn’t want people under the influence of anything other than sexual motivation.” )

archive, yamapi, akame

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paddyabroad June 4 2007, 07:22:24 UTC
First, this is so not what you expect when it says BDSM fic, second, it was really good. Oh and Nagase/Koichi is such a big plus!!!!

I was really wondering what happened after Jin was done, I did not expect Kame offering his hair, himself in this manner, but it was really sweet from that point, even though sweet sounds strangely unfitting. The quote at the end holds so much truth and fits so damned well... and a real story? they married? unbelievable, but that are the stories life tells, I guess.

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astromecha June 4 2007, 20:22:14 UTC
Hahah, yeah, I feel bad for anyone who clicked expecting gratuitous porn and came away with one makeout session and a sense of defeat. Koichi/Nagase are awesome, I'd love to write just a fic about them sometime. ♥

Yep, definitely a true story still being told around the same club almost a decade later. Truth really IS stranger than fiction (though personally, I don't think a trip to Europe even begins to pay off the debt of cutting off your model girlfriend's hair XD) ♥ Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed.

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freefallskyline June 4 2007, 07:41:27 UTC
I love your writing. ♥

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astromecha June 4 2007, 20:22:26 UTC
Thank you very, very much. ♥

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bumped June 4 2007, 07:52:18 UTC
.........
WANT.
WANT A LOT.
Like Shige. Want want want.

Kind of creep.
Ahhh Jin, Johnny is going to kick your ass. );

I WILL BE MORE COHERENT, BB, BUT I HAVE A PROJECT TO DO.

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astromecha June 4 2007, 20:23:53 UTC
Hahahha I put that quote in just for you, Jackie. "What would Shige say? *...consults analysis of Jackie persona* 'Want want want', got it."

Very creep. Are we certain Kate didn't write this?
He'll be sent to America again. At least he got Kame turned on!!1

Go do your project. >:| ♥ ♥

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bumped June 4 2007, 23:10:25 UTC
GOD. THAT'S WHAT I THOUGHT. But then I thought that was very selfish and egotistical of me. "_______ wrote that line thinking of me!! *SNEERRPP!!!*" But yes. I would also walk around in a leather skirt and a garter?

Kate would have showed me this before she posted it. So I am very certain!
AND BALD. ):

I AM.

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snowqueenofhoth June 4 2007, 07:55:02 UTC
Wow.

I was going to have more comments about the beginning (Shige and Ryo sound fun), but then the rest kind of blew that away. It went from funny and strange to very serious suddenly.

I'm not sure how I feel about this, but it was certainly very, very powerful. Sort of disturbing and moving at the same time.
I think seeing the reactions of the other people (especially Pi) intensifies reader reaction, too.

I. Well, it makes you think. A lot.

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astromecha June 4 2007, 20:29:00 UTC
It is definitely not a vanilla, generic sort of thing. I am kind of disturbed, too, but I'm happy it didn't just end up feeling like "Holy shit, Jin shaved Kame!!" and had some other substance to it, too.

Hopefully it doesn't make you think about Johnnys in BDSM clubs too much, haha. Thank you very much for reading! I'm glad you liked (or found it interesting, at least). ♥

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tatsuyuki16 June 4 2007, 08:32:42 UTC
O______O *shocked* and you tell me this happened for real? wow! just wow! poor kame.the becoming bald part quite sting..but it was lovely how he gave his entire self to jin.. i don't know what to say anymore. this was beautiful.the quote in the end fit in perfectly. wow!...thanks for writing this... will it be okay for me to friend you? ^_______^ v

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astromecha June 4 2007, 20:32:56 UTC
Yep, completely true story! I'm not sure I could make it up if I tried, haha. It's disturbingly sweet, in a way; and there's no other pairing that could possibly carry it out other than Akame. It's quite symbolic. I'm glad you liked! ♥ ♥

And yes, absolutely! Feel free to friend. (:

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