As Shite as Poetry Gets (Skeleton Draft)

[astygianelysium]

Babies only cry ‘cause the world’s a depressing place

Heroin, Government, Blood on your face

Only miracle you’ve seen was to be a clever scam,

Married you off to a man who didn’t give half a damn

About whether you lived, died, or your fertile luck

He wanted a good Christian wife to beat and fuck

Belt-whipping, Bible-toting son-of-a-preacher,

Comments

[misterwalnut]

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[icommentonly]

Nice little biopic. The theme, Christian/God-hate is a little redundant. I guess it still beats writing on nature or girlfriends.