The Last Day [1/?]

[asutex]

 

Comments

[motylik]

Wow. Powerful beginning. I hope you continue soon because you have me hooked! :)

[asutex]

I've been having dreams about this story, to be honest. So, I will definitely continue!

[apison]

Very interesting beginning! I definitely would keep reading. I love stories that deal with "end of the world" scenarios so I can't wait to see where you go with it - especially with these characters!

[asutex]

I love "end of the world" fics as well. Most of them have to do with zombies and, I have to say, I love a good zombie story. Girls with guns. Let's all face it: it's hot.

[rosebella5903]

Like them up above I will say the same. Very interesting indeed.

[asutex]

Thank you! I love your avatar, just as a little tangent. I'm not a Twilight fan, but the only thing I do like about it is Alice because she's just that cool.

[katiepult]

I really like how you started and look forward to more. I've found myself trying to find good ApocaFic (ooh. new word? do I get credit? lol) but there's little out there and most of it hasn't been finished.

I'm just curious but how much do you have written? :P

[asutex]

I'll have my rainbow lawyer ducks get right on copyrighting that word for you. Well, having now posted the second chapter, I've been diligently writing the next (I think it's going to be a five-chapter story with a sequel to further explore this apocalyptic world of theirs, but I'm still deciding). Thus far it's been "write as I go" but I have a solid plan already in place for each chapter. I am definitely going to finish this story because, as I said above, I've been having dreams about it. Very detailed, interactive dreams. It's fantastic.

Thank you, I'm glad you like it so far!

[ayden07]

WOW!! THIS IS GOING TO BE AWESOME! I CAN FEEL IT ALREADY! RUN RACHEL RUN!! CANT WAIT TO READ MORE! =)

[asutex]

Thank you so much! I hope you like what I do with the story!