Comments | atama_ga_itai: Um. Original fic :p

atama_ga_itai

Um. Original fic :p

Mar 03, 2009 21:49

Title: Back of the House
Author: Me
Disclaimer: None. Cause, well, this is an original fic.
Rating: PG13
Note: Ummmm...yeah. I wrote an original fic. This is the first of a few stories about the boys who work at Machismo's, an Italian-American restaurant in central Jersey ( Read more... )

back of the house

Comments 17

kat8cha March 4 2009, 03:07:01 UTC

Niiiiiiiiiiice, Tan.

lol, chocolate really?

atama_ga_itai March 4 2009, 03:07:57 UTC

v.v it happens to me?

kat8cha March 4 2009, 03:08:23 UTC

Fascinating

wiccanlilly March 4 2009, 03:10:32 UTC

And when can we see more of this?

atama_ga_itai March 4 2009, 03:12:01 UTC

:D soonly. thank you for reading it. i'll probably work on part 2 tomorrow morning.

wiccanlilly March 4 2009, 03:17:25 UTC

Well, the description had 2 words that always catch my interest *grins* And then it was very well-written in its own right.

atama_ga_itai March 4 2009, 03:18:43 UTC

u.u "cooking" ... "gay" ?

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melpants March 4 2009, 03:58:47 UTC

oo smexy :D

atama_ga_itai March 4 2009, 04:19:43 UTC

moar of teh smex tomorrow. v.v

kiriana March 4 2009, 03:59:52 UTC

Oooh! That was nice, Tan!

Mmmmmm....

atama_ga_itai March 4 2009, 04:20:12 UTC

thanks for reading it :p i keep getting stuck in character development, not enough smut

laurabryannan March 4 2009, 04:07:12 UTC

Woohoo! Go you! I like these guys. Joe's a dashing rake and Monkey sounds totally yummy. This line

He was hot, and they had chemistry, and he was shallow about stuff like that.

Cracked me up! I hope you continue. :D

atama_ga_itai March 4 2009, 04:20:37 UTC

:D i will. tomorrow, perhaps. thanks for reading it. it needs more of teh sex.