Comments | atama_ga_itai: Original fic part three :p

atama_ga_itai

Original fic part three :p

Mar 05, 2009 15:25

Title: Back of the House (part II) ( Part I is here) ( Part II is here)
Author: Me
Disclaimer: None. Cause, well, this is an original fic.
Rating: NC17
Note: Back to Joe's POV. In which there is plot along with the smut.

This happens a few weeks after the last few posts.

( Beef to the right, potatoes to the left. )

back of the house

Comments 15

kat8cha March 5 2009, 20:31:03 UTC

XD What lovely banter

atama_ga_itai March 5 2009, 20:33:11 UTC

i misread that as 'bantha'

...star wars moment

kat8cha March 5 2009, 20:39:42 UTC

Only you Tan, only you

wiccanlilly March 5 2009, 22:37:10 UTC

I can't wait to see dinner with the folks! *grins*

atama_ga_itai March 6 2009, 01:09:46 UTC

it'll be entertaining to write :D

kiriana March 6 2009, 01:08:46 UTC

*chews on* Great as always. Mmmmm... dinner with the family looking on. XD

atama_ga_itai March 6 2009, 01:10:15 UTC

<3 thanks for reading. and yes, hopefully the cook will be impressed, hehe.

nozomi_chan March 6 2009, 04:14:06 UTC

thai kiss. adorable. XD

Since you're going to bed soon, I'll just have to type up more of mine...

atama_ga_itai March 6 2009, 04:16:16 UTC

*grin*

*snuffle*

nozomi_chan March 6 2009, 04:37:54 UTC

*snuffles right back*

laurabryannan March 6 2009, 04:50:04 UTC

I love how comfy they've become together. Looking forward to the family brunch!

atama_ga_itai March 6 2009, 04:50:53 UTC

i'm still struggling with pacing. i guess that's what editing is for. get everything out in 'fic' form, then go back through and massage it into a narrative, eh?