[1] Fanfic: Quiet Night

[atenais_pala]

Title: Quiet Night
Author: Atenais
Rating: G
Length: One-shot
Words: 1923
Pairings: GTOP (SeungHyun/JiYong)
Genre: Canon, Fluff
Beta: boojaejongie (I can’t thank you enough for your help) and aislinoriel (she's an angel).
Summary: Just a chat between dongseng and hyung, a little music and some dance on the roof of YGE.
Disclaimer: Unfortunately, these boys don't belong to me. But

Comments

[atenais_pala]

Me hizo gracia ver que escribiste en castellano y en español. Tu siempre tan dulce, Bea.
Gracias por siempre apoyarme. Además me gustaría agradecerte una vez más por ayudarme con la corrección de mis fics. Espero que sigamos compartiendo el amor GTOP por muucho tiempo. ¿Qué tal?

I'm glad you liked it, mi niña. Maybe someday I'll translate my other fic. I hope you'll support me then.

Thanks... ♥

[fullofwishes]

Wow. This was so lovely darling...my heart is aching in a wonderful way it was so lovely

[atenais_pala]

You can't imagine how happy I felt reading your words. You're a girl that I really respect and I'm a fan of yours. And your entire comment is so sweet, you made constructive criticizes, you cheered me up and you helped me so much. I don't even have words to thank you enough.

Yes, I know that some things got lost in translation, but the worse it's lost the spontaneous, because our languages have different roots. Sometimes the feeling was really awkward, but sometimes I just couldn't find the correct expression, the best way to say what I wanted. So I felt so frustrated.

But this fic isn't good enough to worry me. I'm just glad that I could share this and that I received so much love from you, girls, that I really admire.

Thank you again, Tegan. ♥♥♥

[erikaoi]

hua,ur first fic?its lovely and nice.love it

[atenais_pala]

Yes, my first fic ever. Can you believe? Me.posting.a.fic!
Do you like it? I'm glad to know this. Thanks...

[erikaoi]

Yeah,not bad.its good u start to write.that way more gtop.hoho

[atenais_pala]

And you should try too. It's really fun.
(But I think that I will be just a reader from now). ^^

[atenais_pala]

Thank you so much. I was really excited about this scene when I wrote it. (I wrote this as gift for a friend). But now I think that this fic is so naive and silly.

Well, I have luck, I had two great betas helping me (when you read I had only one XD). It's pretty hard translate, because so much got lost in translation. But I'm still glad that I had the nerve enough to do it.

Thank you, I'll cherish every comment in this entry forever. (I'm a silly like that, but I don't care).

[fakemoon]

Ah~ It's so cute! I loved it!

I'm excited that you wrote something! Which just makes me more pumped about posting the next chapter of my story! Your story fueled me, I must say. It's so happy and fluffy and -squeal-. Yeah. Like that.

I'm glad I got to read this before I left for home. IT just made my day(week).

[atenais_pala]

I wrote this fic there's some time ago, but just now I had the courage to translate it.
It's not easy to me, since my English is not good. D:

But I'm really glad that you like my little fic. And that you feel pumped about your own fic make me feel happier!!! I love your current story, it's really good.

Did you read my fic at your school? Hope you're ok. ^^