Urban Retreat

[athea]

Drawn between the lines of a construction zone and the train tracks is my

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[icecristol]

Keep this one.

I dont wanna give you a critique, hate it when I get them-- but a lot of your writing seems like you tried too hard to convey a feeling..

THIS one-- cuts right to it.

This one is actually, in my opinion, damn fantastic.

And its better writing than most journalists Ive been reading in the Dallas Morning News.

[sakura_in_oct]

I always enjoy reading your posts when you are in the mood to write prose. You have a way with words that never ceases to make me smile. Keep up the good work and sorry for not congratulating you on your marriage sooner, but I honestly didn't know, sorry hun.

[border_autist]

Excellent