Updates in poetry form

[athena_penguin]

I should blog more often, and yet...

Here's a pantoum about my present reality.

Lately I've been eating pomegranates in bed.
there are more delicious ways to stain sheets, but only a few.
There are five people living in this room now.
No one knows whose shoes these are.

There are more delicious ways to stain sheets, but only a few.
When everyplace is a

Comments

[sparklytoast]

You have no idea how badly I want to be a part of that room.
FUUUUUCK MAAAAAAN!
Also took part in a teeny tiny justice/peace rally on campus today, thought of Mills, missed you guys.
The only problem I see with communal living space is a lack of naked time. I need my naked time, I imagine a lack of it would make me cranky, possibly homicidal.
I would be a terrible roommate.
But an awesome visitor!

[athena_penguin]

The nudity is not as much of an issue as you might think. Francis and Alyssa walked in on with me in a bra, sans shirt earlier today. So, I mean...

[box5occupied]

SO. GOOD.
!!!!

[athena_penguin]

Aw, shucks. *foot scuffs*

[cosmonauseous]

this is pretty good veronica.

um. you probably know this but there is a structure of poem very much like this.
i assume that is what you were emulating, only not completely? maybe.
this isn't quite the same as a sestina, it just reminds me of one.

i like sestinas.
sestinas are tricky,
and beautiful.

okay bye

[cosmonauseous]

ps yes i watch you

[athena_penguin]

This is a (slightly off) different form.
I do have a life goal to write a sestina someday, ever since I read Smoke & Mirrors, with the vampire one.