Fic: Splintered, Part Nine

[athena_phoenix]

Part Eight

Part Nine: Visiting Hours

Alfred cleared his throat. "Mr. Kent is here to see you."

Bruce looked up from The Economist to see Clark entering the kitchen, his left hand covering his glasses, feeling his way blindly.

"Is it safe?"

He sighed. "Yes, Clark, it's safe. You don't have to worry about me falling in love with you. You couldn’t

Comments

[athena_phoenix]

Thanks! We know it's been a while in coming. (First draft was in November, pre-move, and it's just taken a long time to get back to it.)

[jlarissa]

YAY! You've updated! It's nice to see that time hasn't changed the wicked humor in the story. Snugglebunny... hee-hee!

[athena_phoenix]

Thanks! This situation is so implausible, that it would be hard to take it completely seriously. And we both chortled at the thought of The Batman using the word "snugglebunny". :-D

[foxtree]

Hi.
I stayed up the entire night reading this story - it's fantastic. I love just how comfortable and trusting your Bruce and Diana are with each other in this story, despite the tension and Bruce's fears. There's just so much chemistry and appreciation underneath all their issues that was great to read.

I'm sad to see that it seems to be abandoned, and the story might be completed in the future. Either way, I have enjoyed the lovely BM/WW fics on your journal, and I do hope you continue writing for the pairing.

[athena_phoenix]

Wow! Thanks for the review and encouragement. We've been discussing how we want to finish "Splintered"; we have the general idea in mind, but now need the details, plus time to sit down and write.

I showed Phoenix your comment this morning. It's so gratifying to know that people still read our work and take the time to comment on it.

Anyway, finishing "Splintered" is definitely one of our goals - maybe this summer, we can make it a reality! Thanks again - and get some sleep. :D