Dragon Bait Chapter 7

Dec 03, 2009 11:53

“” =spoken words

‘’ =thoughts

Chapter seven )

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charisstoma December 4 2009, 06:29:31 UTC
It's been so long and then you give us two chapters. *smile*
Have no idea how Llyr is going to let them go but naked unarmed knights appearing suddenly in a locale far away would be interesting to the native to the region people. *laughs*

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athenaartisan January 28 2010, 09:29:51 UTC
I'm sorry it took so long to get back to you. I hope these for new chapters can smooth things over.

Kieran/Llyr great plan comes out in the last chapter.

enjoy

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ayune01 December 4 2009, 14:56:58 UTC
Llyr=Kieran.
such a great names.

Kieran is such a sweetheart. will do anything for skif.
so romantic.&_&

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athenaartisan January 28 2010, 09:28:05 UTC
I'm glad you like it. Ayune01 But i think you will love the four new chapters more. *grin*

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Man!!! emorybrat December 15 2009, 00:20:26 UTC
Seriously lets hurry this up. Hurry up and post the rest of it. Hurry it up!! MAN. It's been like 10 days.

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Re: Man!!! athenaartisan January 28 2010, 09:25:52 UTC
As my sister You need to calm down. Love you em.

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george_1990 January 23 2010, 23:39:39 UTC
very good story. i hope u continue

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athenaartisan January 28 2010, 09:26:47 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. There is now 4 New chapters up if you want to read them too.

thanks for reading

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lucklessmallory June 6 2010, 00:26:58 UTC
Ugh, Skif is honestly pleading for their lives? After everything they've put him through? Jeez, poor guy. :'( He's kinda overly optimistic, too. Trying to make peace between the kingdom and Kieran? That's way too much to hope for.

I totally love the way Skif thinks of himself in regards to Kieran! <3 I want my own little Skif-pet, too! XD

Favorite lines- ‘Great Skif, just great. You have gone from squire to slave to pet, Your Mother will be so proud.’

‘Yep, he defiantly thinks I’m some type of pet. I wonder when he’s going to start trying to get me to do tricks.’

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