Hockey RPF fic: come so close that I might see (Jamie Benn/Jordan Eberle, PG-13)

[athenejen]

Title: come so close that I might see
Fandom: Hockey RPF
Relationships: Jamie Benn/Jordan Eberle
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~1150 words
Disclaimer: So very, very fictional.
Warnings: None as far as I can tell.
Summary: Jordan gets an unexpected reward for being woken up in the middle of the night.
Notes: Written for prompt #33 of hockeyrarepairs. Details that I

Comments

[vamm_goda]

This was just wonderful! I loved the slightly silly dynamic between them, and how effortlessly you showed how much Jordan'll look out for Jamie with the staying awake and spotting him.

[athenejen]

Aww, thank you! It was fun trying to build the feeling of camaraderie between them. :)

[12ways]

Oh yay! This was super-cute! I love sleepy Jordan: he's adorable and still the best teammate/friend a boy could have, and I love the part about how Jamie's drunken babbling is the most Jordan's ever heard him say: my weird love of Jamie Benn grew mostly out of my love of what a quiet weirdo he is, so that is just spot-on and delightful. I would read a million more words of it, if they existed, but I am very happy with these ones that actually exist right here. So thank you for writing this! It made me smile a lot. :D

[athenejen]

:D I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed it and that it made you smile! Plus, it's always exciting to find someone else who appreciates Jamie Benn and how endearingly awkward he can be -- "quiet weirdo," indeed! Thank you so much for reading and for leaving such lovely feedback. ♥

[athenejen]

Thank you so much, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it! :D