Comments | athlynn17: Fanfic50 : xxxholic : #045. God (part 2)

athlynn17

Fanfic50 : xxxholic : #045. God (part 2)

Nov 01, 2007 13:29

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iambickilometer November 2 2007, 00:19:51 UTC

The end is so amazingly sweet. Well, the whole thing really. I was alternating from "Oh, Watanuki..." to "Oh, Doumeki..." and back again. And...Yuuko...Doumeki....everyone...

One thing I saw:

warm glowering arrow

Did you mean "glowing"?

athlynn17 November 2 2007, 01:20:28 UTC

*hides* Ohmygosh. yes, i meant 'glowing'!Fixed it! thanks for telling! and thanks for reading too! :)

iambickilometer November 2 2007, 01:38:03 UTC

I figured as much. :) You're quite welcome.

black_feenix November 9 2007, 05:27:41 UTC

-sniffs and wipes her teary eyes-
wow. The two chapter for this are so emotional. Poor Yuuko. I loved this bit : "Doumeki knew now, why the sky rained."
Nice writing. You're wrenching at my heart strings.

athlynn17 November 14 2007, 06:46:29 UTC

thanks so much for reading!yeah, hehe, when i first saw the prompt 'god',all i had in mind was yuuko. but it just had to be a douwata fic in the end. hahahha.

black_feenix November 14 2007, 08:17:25 UTC

Oh but of course! Yuuko is perfect as god...a sad god at least.
Who can resist not writing a douwata fic! XD

athlynn17 November 14 2007, 08:30:45 UTC

i know i can't, hahaha XD