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[athousandsmiles]

Author: athousandsmiles
Title: Pearl's House 2/10
Rating: PG-13
Genre: angst, romance, au, supernatural
Summary: Cameron tried to shake off the feeling of being watched and made quick work of searching the place for anything unusual. Problem was, everything there was unusual.
A/N: Written for the weekly challenge at hughvillefics for the prompt New Year's Eve. Unbeta'd

Comments

[thinkingsoul]

This was a bit scary. I can't even begin to imagine what Cameron felt.

How are they going to get off the island, if their boat was not secured and drifted away? Did the ghosts bring that back also? Hm, I'm very curious and can't wait to find out what happens next. :)

[athousandsmiles]

Cameron's being braver than I would, I think. Though it's a good excuse to cling to House. Thanks for commenting. :-D

[autumnfairytale]

Just read both chapters and am really enjoying this! I've always been intrigued by the paranormal and you've done a spectacular job of making what happened in the house eerie and frightening. Camerons fear was palpable. Though, I don't think that they're evil ghosts, they did bring Cameron her phone after all. ; )

Will be anticipating the next part!

[athousandsmiles]

Thanks so much, T. I'm fascinated by the paranormal too, and I think I'm getting more enjoyment from writing this story than any other.

Though, I don't think that they're evil ghosts, they did bring Cameron her phone after all. ; )

Or they just really wanted House and Cameron out of there, ASAP. ;)

[lone_starling88]

Ok, I would've reacted the same way as Cameron, only there would've been screaming and crying coming from me. Whoa! Great chapter, which scared the heck outta me! Nice to see that House, although his outward reaction wasn't much, still got spooked. Loving this and can't wait for the next chapter! =]

[athousandsmiles]

Yes, House is more deeply affected than he's letting on. I'm going to try post the next chapter now, as soon as I get my 8 year old back to bed. 0_o

And thank you. :D

[lone_starling88]

LOL! I loved his reaction, especially when he started walking faster than normal. Ooh, just saw that you posted a new chapter. Off to read!

You're very welcome! =]

[brasilfan]

I'm very curious to know what comes next.
This climate of suspense/terror(excellent idea)is very interesting and it is clear that they will not leave this place so fast.
Kisses and thanks for sharing.

[athousandsmiles]

Thanks so much. More is coming soon. :D

[athousandsmiles]

What are you doing in a hotel? I've been thinking about you, wondering how the move went. Did you get affected by the flooding? Hope you're well.

[athousandsmiles]

Phew! I was sure, when you'd disappeared for so long, that you were in the midst of the floods. I'm so glad to be wrong. I keep seeing the footage on the news. The water is bad enough, but the snakes and crocs in it would do me in completely. Eek!

Glad you're okay. I hope you're able to get settled in to your house soon.