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[athousandsmiles]

Author: athousandsmiles
Title: Pearl's House 4/10
Rating: Now rated M to be safe
Genre: angst, romance, au, supernatural
Summary: Cameron tried to shake off the feeling of being watched and made quick work of searching the place for anything unusual. Problem was, everything there was unusual.
A/N: Written for the weekly challenge at hughvillefics for the prompt New Year's

Comments

[gerriv]

Wow! This story is really creepy! Creepy in a very good way. Can't wait for more, carry on!

[athousandsmiles]

Thank you. I should be able to post another chapter tonight. :-D

[hilandmum]

I loved the way House put it:

"If I'm hallucinating, I might as well make the best of it,"

And he definitely did that! But the mysteriousness is far from over...

Mum

[athousandsmiles]

Heh! I hadn't originally planned that scene, but then, it made sense that House would reach for a medical reason for their experiences first and from there it seemed only logical that he would sleep with her if he thought it was all only in his head.

More to come soon. Thanks Mum.

[autumnfairytale]

Love the fact that they want to stay close to each other. This part was particularly lovely:

He had her naked in moments, spread out on the bed beside him. He drew back then, just when she thought she'd implode with need, and looked at her, and it was as if he was memorizing her, storing the mental picture of her away for the future.

Just beautiful, and something I think House would do if he ever was with Cameron that way. What came after that was great too. ; )

Cameron spying the boat at the end was a nice touch. I really want to know what's at the bottom of the mystery!

[athousandsmiles]

Thanks. I felt the sex scene fell a little flat; I always struggle to make them fresh. I'm glad you liked that part. House is a studious man, and I like to think Cameron is one of his favorite subjects. ;)

I'm trying to write the next part now.

[maybebaby1280]

I think I'm going to need to sleep with my teddy bear tonight. *shivers*

Seriously, though, you have created such an exquisite plot here. The mystery has totally captivated me with its originality and creep-out factor. And then they made love in the hotel and it was so perfect, and I SO hope they don't lose that intimacy once they get back to Princeton!

This bit was moving, lovely, bittersweet, and just all around perfect:
"Wouldn't be the first time I had hallucinations involving you," he admitted, scratching his thumb across his forehead. "And you'd say that even if you weren't really here

[athousandsmiles]

Thank you, my friend. That part was totally spontaneous; this story keeps growing. I'm so glad you liked it. &hearts

[lone_starling88]

Mama mia, so sorry that I'm late with my reply. I love it! Creepy, creepy, creepy, but it's ok because you gave us some wonderful HouseCam scenes. Loved the smex, but I really loved his confession to her about his hallucinations. *sighs* That's one of my all-time fave scenes from the show, too. Great job and am now on to the next chapter. =]

[athousandsmiles]

Thanks so much. I'm so pleased you're enjoying the story.

[lone_starling88]

You're welcome! Love this story and can't wait for another chapter. Take care! =]