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Jan 04, 2011 21:42

Author: athousandsmiles
Title: Pearl's House 5/10
Rating: Now rated M to be safe
Genre: angst, romance, au, supernatural
Summary: Cameron tried to shake off the feeling of being watched and made quick work of searching the place for anything unusual. Problem was, everything there was unusual.
A/N: Written for the weekly challenge at hughvillefics for the prompt New Year's ( Read more... )

house/cameron, house, fanfiction

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hughville January 10 2011, 08:26:50 UTC
I've been waiting for this. I can't wait to find out what happened. I'm a sucker for a good mystery and knowing you the reveal will be amazing. Your explanation of how Cameron met her husband was sweet and believable.

I will not so patiently wait for more.

Oh, and I loved the "Suit up!" line. ;)

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athousandsmiles January 10 2011, 18:21:13 UTC
Thanks so much, L. It's kind of taking on a life of its own, but I do have the end written, and I don't think that part will change. Hopefully it will live up to everyone's expectations.

I'll probably post the next chapter by tomorrow night at the latest.

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penybont January 10 2011, 09:24:08 UTC
This continues to enthrall me. The dialogue between House and Cameron is top rate. The mood you've created is intimate and jokey but still anxious, and it's a joy to read.

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athousandsmiles January 10 2011, 18:22:44 UTC
Oh thank you so much. I really wanted them to have a new intimacy between them based on what they'd gone through, so I'm glad that's coming through. I really appreciate your comment.

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lunschen January 10 2011, 14:27:19 UTC
Amazing MRI scene - I really enjoyed reading this chapter and can´t wait for the next one!

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athousandsmiles January 10 2011, 18:23:54 UTC
Thank you. I so appreciate your comments. I'll try to post the next chapter by tomorrow at the latest.

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maybebaby1280 January 13 2011, 01:16:41 UTC
Wait, how did I miss this chapter? I was getting impatient for you to post the next chapter, and here it was waiting for me to read it this whole time. Oh well, better late than never I suppose.

I like how you've carried their new relationship into "real life". They're acknowledging what happened between them, but not making too big a deal of it, while still maintaining a sexy playfulness. Tough balancing act, but you've pulled it off beautifully!

The whole MRI scene was brilliant. It was sexy, fun, and intimate all at the same time.

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athousandsmiles January 13 2011, 01:32:13 UTC
Ha. And I'm just about to post the next one, which took me way longer to finish than I thought it would. Anyway, thank you for another lovely comment. There be angst ahead, but I promise a happy ending. :D

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lone_starling88 January 13 2011, 06:31:27 UTC
Love, love, love! Great story about Cameron meeting her husband. Also finding it very interesting that all tests came out normal, yet they're still in the dark about Pearl. Hmm...can't wait for more!

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athousandsmiles January 13 2011, 20:10:40 UTC
Thanks so much. Your comments make me smile. :-)

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lone_starling88 January 14 2011, 03:04:08 UTC
You're very welcome and thank you! =]

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