Fic.

[tatooine]

Title: "Our World."
Pairing: Athrun/Kira, Athrun/Lacus, Athrun/Shinn, Athrun/Cagalli. You can take them as shippy or non-shippy as you please.
Rating: PG.
Genre: Gen, romance.
Word count: 1,802.

Comments

[midoriyuki]

argh~ love this ficcies XD~ esp on how the Athrun centric with all the chara that he REALLY is involved with, not only fur AthCaga as my OTP but also Shinn, Kira and Lacus
i really like how it was done ^__^
it really seems more possible to happen *claps*

[tatooine]

Well, I actually picked the SEED-mode characters, because otherwise I would have kept on writing until I wrote, like, Athrun/Miguel. Or Athrun/Anakin Skywalker or something.

AsuCaga is my het OTP (well, after ShinnStellar), but it's hard for me to write because... it's beautiful enough in the series. And yeah, I wanted to show Athrun with a bunch of other people, not just Cagalli. ^_______^

[teletha]

That was probably the sweetest thing I've read in a while. I thought the beginning was great, but it kept getting better. I love the Shinn part the best I think. I can feel the love under that bad attitude of his. XD

I also love not focusing so much on love, but friendship. I love Lacus/Kira/Cagalli/Athrun just being friends and exploring the bond they all share.

did I say love too much? Nice job. ^^

[tatooine]

Heh, thanks. I think I like Shinn's bad temper best about him, so I tried to work some of his grumpiness in, since his and Lacus's segments weren't done from Athrun's POV.

It's hard to do love, because SEED already has love -- it has AsuCaga kissing scenes and exchanging rings and Kira and Lacus being absolutely devoted to each other. That's part of the reason that I can't stick just to the pretty canon pairings -- I like writing everyone. 8D

Thaaaaaaaank yooooooooooou.

[asga]

I love it, i like all of it .... but my OTP maybe asucaga one and asushin also good here ^^

[tatooine]

AsuCaga's absolutely adorible, even if I have a hard time writing it. ^^ Glad you liked it~!

[fluffyfledgling]

Amazing fic. I'm stunned by how well you captured and expanded on Athrun's relationships with the other four, and I think you deserve a standing ovation *claps* LIke most good fics, this one rather renders me speechless (hence my rather not so great comment) but I'm trying my best to tell you what I liked about it...^^;;

Beautifully done. Really. And it was Athrun-centric (yay!) despite it having all of the pairing included. (Not too much otp suffocation, here, woohoo)

*idolizes you*

Adding this to my memories!

And I'm suddenly overcome by the urge to friend you. hmm?

[tatooine]

Heh, the shifting OTPs happened because I like so many different pairings -- not all in the OTP way, but because they're fun to write. So I picked the main-ish characters (uh, definted as "the ones who go SEED," because otherwise I'd never stop writing XD) and went with them, because they, for the most part, are the ones who really spend the most time with Athrun. :D

Friends are always good, but I really don't update this journal much -- I update shinncest much more often, and that's where all the fic goes. XD

[fluffyfledgling]

All right, I'll friend that, then. I have a habit of stalking good writers, hehe.

^^

[tatooine]

Heh, thanks! It's not too active, but I do try to get stuff up eventually. :P

[tokyofish]

Oh, I enjoyed this and how you get a better picture of Athrun pieced together from everyone's different perspectives of him. And then you tied it together so nicely at the end. ^___^

[tatooine]

Geh, the end was the hardest part -- hopefully, I avoided making it sound too forced, trying to bring all the earlier sections together.

Thanks!