Eh, I try to write and this is all that comes out, but hasn't it been like forever?

[athyestean]

Title: Last To Fall
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Uchiha Itachi and Uchiha Sasuke (and Uchiha Mikoto)
Prompt: 047. Heart.
Word Count: 367 words
Rating: PG

Summary: He is blessed. He is cursed. He is an Uchiha.

A/N: I suddenly had the urge to write Mikoto. I wanted to give her a point of view rather than the blandness of canon. Bad Kishimoto! Bad!

Sasuke’s

Comments

[maxxim_huzzah]

I love reading the fear Mikoto has, mixed in with her hope for Sasuke. And the contrast between how she feels about Itachi--even though she asks him...is great. The last line sealed everything. *nod nod* :D

[athyestean]

Wow, thank you. I really was hoping to capture Mikoto well, since she is hardly ever done. I did not want to be the one in less than 500 words to ruin her.

... I loved the last line too. Wanna know a secret? That is what I started with. *whistles innocently*