I REVIVED THE DEAD LINK, SORRY HARDCORE 'BOUT THAT. I BLAME FANFICTION.NET'S STUPID AND UNREASONABLE CAPS-HATE. ^^;
I AM LIKE 100% DELIGHTED YOU MADE THIS COMMUNITY AND WILL BE SURE TO SEARCH OUT MORE HORRORFESTS. ATLA FANDOM IS LITTERED WITH THEM; I KNOW I'VE SEEN AN ATLA/HP CROSSOVER WITH TWO SUES, ONE OF WHOM IS A CATGIRL. :D
ALL OF THE ARTEESTIC FLURISHES IN THIS STORY WERE SO GREAT, I REALLY DO HOPE THERE WILL BE MORE CHAPTERS. WHEN I GOT TO THE PART ABOUT THE "MAGNIFICENT BEAST" TAKING FLIGHT, I ACTUALLY DID LAUGH OUT LOUD. AYZA'S A STEREOTYPICAL SUE BUT A PRETTY RAD ONE I THINK, A DECENT FIRST POST FOR THE COMM. :D GOTTA WORK OUR WAY UP TO GODAWFUL, RIGHT?
(THE WRITER ACTUALLY SEEMS TO SPECIALIZE IN BADSUE WRITING, CHECK OUT HER PROFILE.)
NOOOO, DEAD SOURCE LINK IS DEAD. BUT THOSE EYES WERE TERRIFYING ENOUGH. I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS 'FLECKS OF GOLD' MESS. IT MAKES ME THINK SOMEONE PUNCHED THEM IN THE FACE WHILE WEARING A ROLEX.
AND YES TO THE PUNCH IN THE FACE WITH A ROLEX, BUT PROBABLY A CHEAP ROLEX THAT ONE BOUGHT FROM A GUY IN A TRENCHCOAT, FOR THAT IS THE ONLY REASON PIECES OF GOLD ARE FLYING OFF OF IT.
IT WOULD BE EVEN MORE EPIC IF IT WOULD HAVE BEEN LIKE, "TOPH HAD NEVER FELT SUCH A BEAUTIFUL GIRL BEFORE! USUALLY GIRLS WHO FELT THIS BEAUTIFUL WERE NOT WARRIORS!"
THE AUTHOR MUST HAVE GOTTEN MAD TIRED OF TELLING MICROSOFT WORD THAT "AYZA" IS A WORD. I HAD TROUBLE NOT TYPING IT AS "AZYA", BECAUSE I KEPT THINKING, "AZ YA WERE, TROOPS." *SALUTES*
I FULLY EXPECT THIS STORY TO BECOME A 3446346352356735-CHAPTER EPIC IN TIME. INTERNET TIVO WOULD BE SO USEFUL!
I THINK THE PREDOMINANT TRENDS IN ATLA SUES ARE THUS: 1.) THEY HAVE GOLD EYES AND/OR GOLD HAIR AND 2.) ZUKO FALLS IN LOVE WITH THEM.
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I AM LIKE 100% DELIGHTED YOU MADE THIS COMMUNITY AND WILL BE SURE TO SEARCH OUT MORE HORRORFESTS. ATLA FANDOM IS LITTERED WITH THEM; I KNOW I'VE SEEN AN ATLA/HP CROSSOVER WITH TWO SUES, ONE OF WHOM IS A CATGIRL. :D
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A+++ WOULD BUY MARY SUE WITH GIGGLY BOOBS AGAIN.
ALL OF THE ARTEESTIC FLURISHES IN THIS STORY WERE SO GREAT, I REALLY DO HOPE THERE WILL BE MORE CHAPTERS. WHEN I GOT TO THE PART ABOUT THE "MAGNIFICENT BEAST" TAKING FLIGHT, I ACTUALLY DID LAUGH OUT LOUD. AYZA'S A STEREOTYPICAL SUE BUT A PRETTY RAD ONE I THINK, A DECENT FIRST POST FOR THE COMM. :D GOTTA WORK OUR WAY UP TO GODAWFUL, RIGHT?
(THE WRITER ACTUALLY SEEMS TO SPECIALIZE IN BADSUE WRITING, CHECK OUT HER PROFILE.)
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BUT THOSE EYES WERE TERRIFYING ENOUGH.
I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS 'FLECKS OF GOLD' MESS. IT MAKES ME THINK SOMEONE PUNCHED THEM IN THE FACE WHILE WEARING A ROLEX.
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AND YES TO THE PUNCH IN THE FACE WITH A ROLEX, BUT PROBABLY A CHEAP ROLEX THAT ONE BOUGHT FROM A GUY IN A TRENCHCOAT, FOR THAT IS THE ONLY REASON PIECES OF GOLD ARE FLYING OFF OF IT.
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THOUGH, USING MY L337 H4X0RZ 5K1LLZ (LAWL), I WAS STILL ABLE TO FIND IT. HINT: REPLACE THE CAPITAL "S" IN THE URL WITH A LOWERCASE.
AS FOR THE FIC ITSELF: OBVIOUS MARY-SUE IS OBVIOUS. THAT "FLECKS OF GOLD" CRAP ALWAYS BOTHERS ME AS WELL. AND "PERIWINKLE-WHITE-VIOLET"? WTF?
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I STILL AM NOT SURE WHAT COLOR PERIWINKLE-WHITE-VIOLET IS, PLZ SEND HELP.
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IM SORRY THIS IS MAKING ME LMAO
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I FULLY EXPECT THIS STORY TO BECOME A 3446346352356735-CHAPTER EPIC IN TIME. INTERNET TIVO WOULD BE SO USEFUL!
I THINK THE PREDOMINANT TRENDS IN ATLA SUES ARE THUS: 1.) THEY HAVE GOLD EYES AND/OR GOLD HAIR AND 2.) ZUKO FALLS IN LOVE WITH THEM.
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TRUESTFAX.
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