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Fairy Tale Dynamics (2/2) ~ SGA (McShep)

Feb 05, 2007 16:32

Title: Fairy Tale Dynamics (2/2)
Author: icantfollow
Characters: Rodney McKay/John Sheppard
Prompt: #086 Choices
Word Count: ~10,300
Genre: Fairytale AU
Rating: PG13
Summary: He says his name is John and he's a prince. Rodney, born to anti-establishment parents and raised by a witch with plans for world domination, takes his word for it.

Part I is here

( Sometimes John is not very princely at all. )

fairy tale dynamics, stargatefic100, pg13, mcshep, sga

Comments 32

mymanifesto February 6 2007, 01:26:43 UTC

Loved it! Rodney stuck in that nasty old tower and John trying to coax him out. What a great idea! A cool mix of the old fairy tale.

calijirl5150 February 6 2007, 02:07:28 UTC

AWWWWWWWWWWw, I love it added to my memories if you dn't mind?

Fairytale Dynamics feedback suzy_queue February 6 2007, 02:23:10 UTC

Awww!! Sweet, sad, and totally awesome. I love how you mixed the characters into the fairy tale. I loved it!

kibou_sueshijuu February 6 2007, 03:20:57 UTC

aw, man, this was awesome! ^.^ What a perfect blend of Rapunzel and SGA, haha. ^.^ I like how even though it was humourous, it was still an actual attempt at a story, rather than random crack thrown together with an age-old plot. This was great!

Some of my fave lines:

Rodney's never really liked his parents, but it's not until this moment that he realizes the feeling's mutual.

In fact, Rodney would respect her a great deal if it weren't for the fact that she requested a human being in exchange for a vegetable that's 90% water.

Rodney's not sure what he expects. Sparks? Fireworks? Spit?

'Hey,' he shouts. 'Let your hair down for once!'

tassosss February 6 2007, 04:54:22 UTC

This is very wonderful! I like the style you wrote in mixing up the fairy tale language with that of the science of Atlantis. This was fun.