Petals of a Cherry Blossom - Chapter 4B - KazukixManabu

[atmosphere_zero]

Title: Petals of a Cherry Blossom
Chapter: 4b/??
Author: atmosphere_zero
Beta-Reader: misfitmisfit (Thank you so much for beta-reading it! <3

Comments

[golden_kimono]

I always look forward to reading this story. :) Usually I'm not a big fan of crossovers (mostly because sometimes they include bands I don't know, which makes it difficult to follow the story XD), but yours is really good. And my favourite part would have to be the same as yours. XD I feel quite bad for Kazuki in this story... And now worried for Mizuki. >.>

Can't wait for the next part!

[atmosphere_zero]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting <33

Wah, thank you ^//^ *flattered*

Ah, I do apologize about the crossover (シ_ _)シ I just have an odd habit of writing crossovers (>.<) Hopefully, the characters make sense ^^;;

When I was reading it over, I, sometimes, scrolled down just to read that part, haha XDD

Yeah, Kazuki doesn't have such a good life :( Going to cross our fingers for Mizuki!

Currently writing the next part as fast as possible so please look out for it ^^

[golden_kimono]

Oh, I don't worry, I don't mind this being a crossover, otherwise I wouldn't be reading it. :) I love SCREW, Sadie and Gazette and actually know everyone in the other bands, so it makes sense to me perfectly fine. Admittedly I mostly started reading it because of the KazukixManabu, but I like seeing so many other people too. It'd be difficult to only use one band for a story like this, I think, or it'd be filled with OCs. >.>

[atmosphere_zero]

Ah, I see. Relieved to hear that ^^ I thought it might have been confusing, lol.

Haha, yeah. When I planned out the story, I saw the amount of characters I was going to have to write realizing that one band wasn't going to fit all of the roles ^^;; I didn't want to use a bunch of OCs so my crossover pairing instincts kicked in, lol.

[wnb_angel]

I feel sorry for Mizuki, he was protecting Manabu from all the pranks and he really cares about him... and I'm worried now, with his father showing up and all.

Yay for Kazuki and Manabu advancing<3, so lovely. I really can't wait for their weekend <3.

And the part whit Kazuki and Rui was so sad (T_T).

[atmosphere_zero]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

Yeah, Mizuki is protecting Manabu with his love and doesn't get noticed at all... Got to cross out fingers and hope nothing happens to him (><)

They both want each other's lives... It's such a sad conflict between them :(

Haha, yeah, lots of stuff has to happen on the weekend between them ^_~ Although, I'm a newbie when it comes to writing such scenes f^^;; So I'll do my best to make it good

Currently writing the next as fast as possible so please look out for it!

[alizamarie_chan]

OMG <3333333
G R E A T!!!!!!!

[atmosphere_zero]

Thank you so much <33

Aww, thanks a lot ^//^ *flattered*

Currently writing the next chapter as fast as possible so please look out for it!

[pickles_pick]

AKDKFGJSJKFLSJ *arms flailing*

*Takes deep breath* OMG UPDATESSSS~~ <333 Awesome chapter, as always!!

I love the interaction between Tora and Manabu~ Bu plz acknowledge your bro soon. TTATT

And that interaction between Kazuki and Rui...my heart breaks for them. But wait, you dropped quite a cliffie there...Mizuki!? *mafiabossfightoverBuchan*

Looking forward to the next chappieeee~~~~

[atmosphere_zero]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! <3

Thanks a lot ^//^ *flattered*

Yes! Mana needs to find out that Tora is his real brother who cares about him x(

The interaction between Kazuki and Rui is quite sad ;A; Hopefully, their relationship can change for the better soon.

In the editing process of Chapter 5 so it should be out sometime soon ^^

[k435y]

lol! maybe mizuki loves babu more because he actually sacrifices himself rather than others like kazuki does. XD

Kazuki held his index finger out in which a small bird was perched on it. could it be...that kazuki is secretly snow white?! lol. what am i saying? ><;

alcohol around the eye area?! ouch! D8 babu shoulda just boiled him an egg. XD

Or why else would Manabu tolerate someone as annoying as him? money, hotness, kills time, etc. lol. not that that's why babu's with him. just saying there are possibilities. XD

He wondered if Manabu’s lips were so sweet, what the rest of him tasted like. kazuki-san, please restrain yourself from gobbling up our little babu-chan. we still need him for the rest of the story, you see. =_=;

lol! nickname just came outta nowhere. XD aww... mizuki~ T_T

haaaaa. tora's so funny. XD

It must have been that brute, Manabu. bwahahaha how is manabu a brute? XD ...well, he did punch kazuki a few times but didn't seem like uru was there to witness those times... o_O

[atmosphere_zero]

Kazuki being Snow White? o.o;; I hope not for Manabu's sake! *getting bad stories ideas >.<*

Hehe, Tora is always the comedian XD

Unless, somehow, Uruha was able to see that happen...? o_o;;

Yeah, not good especially since it's Uruha ><;

It was definitely Kazuki's father... but now I have to shut my mouth before revealing anymore secrets about the story XD ^^;;