No matter where I go, a part of you will be...

[atomandhispack]

Some day you will be walking - alone - down the empty streets watching the people pass. Cars will flutter by and buildings will stand still. You will stop to look through the store window. The curly haired saleswoman peering through the clear glass will pierce your memory like daggers and you will remember how you shattered my heart into peices

Comments

[atomandhispack]

Thank you muchly... it is always nice to hear a comment like that once in a while...

aww!

[xlostboysx]

You seriously made me cry... My problems suck ass compared to yours. Or at least I can't write and make them sound as good. That was seriously awesome. I hope it all works out for you though. I new friend I have told me, when I least expect it, I'll find someone. I think she is right?

Re: aww!

[atomandhispack]

Thank you very much... don't worry, nobody's problems suck compared to anyone's because everybody's problems are equally important. And in deed, everything will workout, because everything works out in the end and if its not alright, its not the end.

[decembermalice]

Hey, I guess I'm just saying that I like the way you write...very poetic. Angry...bitter...nice.

[atomandhispack]

Thanks... :)

[themadviolinist]

wow...i just have to say, this is one of the most beautiful things i have ever read.

[atomandhispack]

Thanks a lot... that was sweet of you to say.

[eatmycherri]

wow that was great
....you could of done better though.... sliding abit in your writing ability...i know you can do better than this shit lol jj hahahahahaha
it was awsome love shayna