Comments | atomic_fiction: Baby, Slow Down- FIC, HP

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Baby, Slow Down- FIC, HP

Mar 11, 2006 23:14

Title: Baby, Slow Down
Author: gelsey
Rating: PG-13, maybe
Fandom/Pairing(s): Harry Potter, Hermione Granger/Severus Snape
Warnings: Character death, violence, nothing serious
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be.
A/N or Summary: The muse has been tricky, but here is my offering. I hope someone enjoys it.

Baby, slow down ( Read more... )

Comments 7

lilian_cho March 12 2006, 06:28:57 UTC

ZOMG I loved this! *fangirls* Great job!

My fav. lines:

Keeping secrets, being vague about school, and her new friends--both boys, which was odd, in Penelope’s opinion.

:-D You don't know your daughter well enough, apparently.

Penelope had calmed him down at the time, but when they’d been informed that Hermione had gotten petrified somehow, she had had the same vehement reaction. Of course, until their daughter was un-Petrified, she couldn’t be pulled out of the school.

:-(

it would be beyond difficult to pull their unwilling daughter from a place they couldn’t even see if they had a clue where it was.

Hermione had written back a cool reply with some very logical arguments, and Penelope had written back with a plea, to please, baby, slow down. Enjoy life now, don’t grow up so fast, don’t push yourself too hard.

;_;

In short, she lost her daughter’s trust.

Hm, do you think it's just Penelope's perception or does Hermione really no longer trust her mother's judgment?

how she left a Ministry official and teacher out among ( ... )

gelsey March 12 2006, 16:12:48 UTC

Hehe, thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it ... it was a rush job, at the end, because my muse has just been so uncooperative. Thankees for the nitpicks, they're much needed, and I'm glad it made some sort of sense. :)

lilian_cho March 14 2006, 12:12:51 UTC

Mine ran away from the outline too X-D
Wrote it in between visits to relatives and shopping trips lol.

I was aiming for established relationship, angsty!Draco. It ended up gen, whiny!Draco :-P

somigliana March 12 2006, 10:50:43 UTC

Jas, this was absolutely fantastic :)

I love the way you've used her eyes to convey everything.

(So sorry I was away yesterday, m'dear...)

gelsey March 12 2006, 16:14:01 UTC

Thanks :) You flatter me, I don't think it's all that wonderful, but I appreciate the sentiment most definitely.

Don't worry about it, I got Ree to look at it and catch the most horrendous mistakes. Just hope you had a good trip :)

tgfkaa March 12 2006, 12:18:06 UTC

I usually try to stay away from Hermione/Snape, because most of it is just too sappy for my taste, but I really liked this one.

gelsey March 12 2006, 16:15:09 UTC

Hm, too sappy? I don't usually hear that complaint about the 'ship, lol. It is my favorite, though.

But, I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and commenting :D