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[why_me_why_not]

Title: The Last Time
Author: why_me_why_not
Rating: Mature
Fandom/Pairing(s): Original fiction
Warnings: Femmeslash.
Word Count: 1400 words
Disclaimer: I disclaim that I'm full of shit most of the time, and the characters written about here are purely voices in my head fictional beings from my imagination.
A/N: Thanks goes to anael for encouragement & betaing, and

Comments

[somigliana]

That was wonderful -- it so did not suck :)

I really did love this line:
my name that trips brokenly over her lips

[why_me_why_not]

thank you, honey! I was decidedly worried about posting this b/c it's a bit outside my normal comfort zone. I've very glad you liked.

[kat_scratches]

That definitely did not suck. That was wonderfully sensual, in fact!
My mark. Where it's at, no one would be able to see it, but I'll know it's there. And so will she... I love that; I love the utter possession in that.

[why_me_why_not]

ah, thank you! Yay! It makes my day that people like this!

I'm glad you like that line -- I debated whether or not to include it, but I like the ideas of possession and power.

[wearethestars]

With the shirt gone, I mouth her nipple through the fabric of her bra, teasing the bud to tautness before moving to the other breast to do the same. THAT IS HOTTTT!!!!!

and this... It's my name that trips brokenly over her lips as she comes. is my favorite line.

You sure you're not a lesbian? hehehehehe. Just kidding.

[why_me_why_not]

*points to icon*

it's all your fault, you know. *g*

[wearethestars]

OMG... that's the best icon EVAR!!!! I'm glad you like lesbians now! XD

[why_me_why_not]

Bite me. *g*

I'm glad you like lesbians now!

I've always liked lesbians, I just... like them a bit more now... or something ;)

[luahoana]

Wow, Tabby!!!

That felt so incredibly real... so, so beautiful!! :)

It's my name that trips brokenly over her lips as she comes.

I agree with all of them about this line. It about sums up all the emotions of this fic in one achingly beautiful line.

[wearethestars]

See... real! She's a closet lesbian, I'm telling you. I thought so too!!!

[luahoana]

Should we form a plan to go visit and convince her? ;)

[wearethestars]

Yes. Definitely.

*looks at watch*

When's good for you?

[wendy]

I agree with everyone else's comments. I like this line too:

This is an old discussion. We can't, we shouldn't. But we always do.

Because, hello! Know that story well.

[why_me_why_not]

I'm so glad you liked it! (and even more glad that you read it & commented)

This is an old discussion. We can't, we shouldn't. But we always do.
Because, hello! Know that story well.

so don't we all. Been there, done that. unfortunately, we'll probably do it again...