The Holy Robert Brotherhood / How to Explain Paintings to a Dead House & Hare

[atoreilly]

We Wrote Off Our Income in Times New Roman
Our source of explosive materials comes from the journey we took last week to the wine and dine boutique on the corner of Wide and Dieing Avenue. Our boulevard left nothing to the full spectrum of focused conscious thought and wrote a circle circle fire hyrdant dressed up in costume to look like a square.

Comments

[uhu]

You poop-lick, your writing would greatly benefit from correct spelling.

[atoreilly]

Ok, all those words there, alot of them are made up, or variations of words, or word fragements. They are spelt that way on purpose.

[uhu]

Yes, but I'm talking about instances when there is no discernable point is using the wrong form of a word, like:

Your Sun-lit and Chalk Full of Rock Salt

That almost ruined the post for me! THis is one of my top five favorites too.

[uhu]

"exsistence" too, did you mean to modify "existence"? or is it just a mis-spelling? It's borderline to me but generally I know exactly what you mean to say by combining or modifying words.

[uhu]

It's like in "Taste Three Corners of your Province", which is another favorite of mine; I don't understand why you misspelled "shepherds" and also used "Your" instead of "you're". It is really good writing, but those sorts of things kind of make it a lot less appealing to me - like fingerprints on a photo.

[uhu]

I changed this one for you:

http://www.livejournal.com/users/uhu/157375.html