Page 19!

[atrius]

Page 19 of Jamie the Trickster is up!

Wtf is a-goin' on, yo?

Comments

[madhatte]

While you have the occasional frame that is less than 100%, I have got to tell you, your work is consistently improving and the story is compelling. Good on you!

[atrius]

Thanks! What do you mean by an occasional frame being less than 100%, exactly?

[madhatte]

Knew you'd ask that! Chapter 2, page 18, embedded frame, 3/4 shot from above. The foreshortening looks right, the proportions look right, and yet something doesn't ring true. I have a feeling that you agonized over this one for awhile before finally saying "aw, fuck it, nobody's gonna notice"!

[atrius]

Um. . actually, it looks good to me. Maybe it's the arm/hand placement? I did struggle with that for a little while.