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Mar 24, 2006 16:54

Title: Picked Up a Bad Habit
Author: atrocious_x
Pairing: Syn // Zacky
Rating: NC17
Summary: [AU]. Zacky obliged of course; there was no disobeying Sergeant Major Haner.
Disclaimer: Not real, a dur.
Dedication: For the lovely kaytvengeance.



This is just something that I'm trying to use as a stepping stone out of my writer's block.

Picked Up a Bad Habit

Sergeant Major Brian Haner was standing still as a statue, hands on his thick hips as he watched the young man before him, on his hands and knees, and scrubbing the floor with a too small sponge. Private Zack Baker had definitely seen better days; he hadn't been there too long, and was already loathing the man who held authority over him.

"You're lucky I don't make you use a toothbrush." Brian said, half amused by the sour look on the boy's face.

"You don't have to stand over me, though." Zack said under his breath.

Brian raised his eyebrows, putting a hand up to cup it over his ear. "What was that, Private?" he asked.

Zack shook his head.

"Are you sure you didn't say anything?" Brian asked, "I think the bathroom could use some cleaning too."

"I said nothing, sir." Zack said, through gritted teeth.

Brian grinned to himself, turning on his heel, and starting to pace around slowly. He was just keeping up with annoying Zack, pretending to be inspecting the floor for any spots of any kind of dirt. Ever since he'd met the new recruit, he knew what he wanted. He'd developed a sort of bad habit with the new guys, especially the ones who looked like they'd be defenseless in certain situations. That was part of the reason that Brian had the boy scrubbing the floor now; he'd just wanted some alone time. Granted, since he was Sergeant Major Haner, he could've tried to pull the shit off anywhere, and have gotten away with it.

He turned around and glanced back at Zack, who sat back on his haunches with a heavy sigh. He was nowhere near finished, and he was just being a little bitch about the whole thing. But that was something that turned Brian on about him.

"You think that being a smart ass is an intelligent thing to do around here, Private?" Brian asked, and the boy was unable to catch the amused tone.

Zack glanced over at him, looking uncertain. "No, sir." he finally said.

Brian fought hard to keep the grin from appearing on his face. "Come here." he said, and Zack slowly stood up. "Follow me."

He strode down the hallway, the air of cockiness evident, and Zack followed meekly behind, hoping he wasn't in any more trouble.

"You've got quite a mouth on you." Brian said. "Do you always talk back to authority figures?"

Zack didn't answer, but Brian didn't seem to mind. It wasn't long before he found himself being led into a room, which was most clearly, Brian's office. The older man held the door open for him, and he stepped over the threshold slowly, as though expecting it to be a minefield. As Brian shut the door, Zack sat down in one of the two chairs in front of the desk, and a moment later, Brian appeared in front of him, perching on the edge of the wood.

"If I'm correct," Brian said, "You're only here for your father."

Zacky nodded, but said nothing. Brian also nodded, crossing his large arms over his larger chest.

"Let me tell you something, kid." he said. "With your attitude, it's amazing how you've lasted this far without angering someone else."

Zack kept his gaze lowered, not knowing what to say or how to take things. Was Brian planning on dropping him or something? Could he even get fired from the army like that?

Brian straightened, and walked to the large window to Zack's left, gazing out at the gray sky. He could make out the field where First Sergeant Sanders was being a hard ass to a large group of Privates. There was a small boost to his ego; every time he remembered that Matt was in fact, below him, he felt so much better about himself.

"Zack," he said suddenly. "You're in the army now." he was talking slowly, as though musing to himself. "You're here to get toughened up, to become a man."

Zack opened his mouth to defend his manliness, but Brian turned to him, and he stopped like he was intimidated.

"Stand up." Brian said, nearing his desk again.

Zacky quickly obliged, straightening his white tee shirt over his immature body. Brian, allowing the grin to finally appear on his face, grabbed the Private suddenly, turning him around so that he held the boy against his desk, not hesitating to cause the edge of the desk to cut into Zack's lower back. He ignored both the shocked expression, and the wince that came from the Private.

"Let me ask you something." he said. "Just so I'm in the clear -- have you ever found yourself attracted to another man?"

"What?" Zack asked, his jade eyes widening. "No."

"Really?" Brian asked, and the Private nodded feverishly. "So if I were to ask you if you were attracted to me, you'd say 'no'?"

Zack started to nod, but it turned into a shake of his head, then he gave an almost frustrated sigh. "I don't know." he exclaimed.

Brian pushed his hips forward suddenly, and Zack let out a short noise as he felt the older man's large, hard cock rub against his own. Brian grinned down at him, his lips almost close enough to ghost over the Private's.

"You don't know?" Brian echoed, a mocking tone in his voice. "Are you sure about that?"

He pushed his hips forward again, and another small noise came from the younger man. Just like Brian had hoped, the friction had been enough to harden Zack's own dick, and within seconds it was pushing back against the older man's.

"I think it's safe to say that you find me attractive." Brian said in a low tone.

Zacky opened his mouth to say something, but words left him, and he closed it again. Brian was now grinning from ear to ear at the way Zack's cheeks had reddened, and the way the boy's eyes were focused on the top button of Brian's shirt, refusing to go any higher. Brian let go of Zack's waist with one hand, slowly moving it down to come to a stop on the boy's groin. Zack's breathing hitched, and he held it as the older man teasingly traced his fingers along the bulge in his pants.

Much to the younger man's disappointment, Brian moved that hand once more, taking it away from Zack's erection, and he firmly grabbed the boy's chin. He held him in place as he leaned down and roughly kissed the Private. Still not knowing really how to react, Zacky just stood there, even when Brian bit his bottom lip almost sharply. After a moment or two, he warmed up to the kiss, and he parted his lips, allowing Brian's tongue to selfishly enter his mouth.

He invaded the boy's mouth without a care, keeping one hand on Zack's chin, while the other was holding his hip in a tight grasp. He broke the kiss suddenly, a grin on his face; he was thoroughly enjoying the shocked expression the younger man wore.

"Turn around." he said, tone low and husky.

But before Zack could even react, the older man spun him around quickly, pushing him forward against the desk. A jar of pens fell to the floor, but it went ignored as Zack's eyes widened, and he stared at the surface of the desk. He heard a short laugh from Brian, and the sound of it sent chills dancing up his spine. So what if he was attracted to the man in control of him? It was hard to see how anyone couldn't be? But he didn't know that he'd end up in a situation like this.

"Sir --" he said, but was only able to come up with a few short noises after that.

Brian, still grinning to himself, ran his fingers through Zack's hair, while his other hand snaked around the boy's waist to the fly of his pants. Zack made another noise, sounded like an incoherent plea, and he squirmed a little bit, as though trying to maneuver his hips away.

"Baker," Brian said, in a mock-authoritarian tone. "Still."

Zacky obliged of course; there was no disobeying Sergeant Major Haner. He held his breath as he felt the button of his pants pop, and the zipper was slid down with ease. Brian's fingers brushed against his erection, and he bit the inside of his cheek to keep from making a noise. The older man's grin had faded some, things had turned into slightly more of a serious issue now that he was going to pursue his pleasure.

He wasted no time in pulling the Private's pants over his small hips, baring his, for lack of better words, cute ass. Excitement for the older man was definitely an understatement. He leaned down close to Zack's ear, and he could still see the rosy tints on the boy's cheeks. Brushing his lips over Zack's ear, he cleared his throat quietly.

"This is a first, no?" he asked in a whisper.

He could see Zack swallow, and the younger man gave a short nod. Brian nodded himself, before biting at the boy's earlobe. As he stood and straightened again, he reached down to mess with his own pants. Even though he wasn't holding onto Zack's hips anymore, the boy stayed in place, half bent over the desk, and hanging his head.

As Brian pulled his large cock from its confines, he leaned forward again. "Don't worry." he said. "I'll make sure it's enjoyable for you too."

Zack cleared his throat almost nervously, and his eyes flickered to the door. "Sir," he said. "What if --?"

Brian laughed, cutting him off. "Jesus Baker, you didn't hear me lock it?" he asked. "What in the name of God are you doing in the army?"

Zack's blush deepened, and Brian laughed again, straightening once more. He quickly reached up, and put two of his fingers into his mouth, getting them slick with saliva. As he lowered his hand, he put his other one on Zack's lower back, holding him against the desk, as well as letting him know that things were speeding up.

He felt Zack's body tense, but he ignored it, using one of his legs to spread the boy's further apart. He murmured something to the Private about relaxing, before he pressed his two fingers against Zack's tight entrance. He gave the boy a moment to take a breath, before he started to push his fingers into him. A small noise stirred in the back of Zack's throat, but besides that he kept quiet, and Brian pushed his fingers as deeply as they could go. He held them there, allowing Zack to get used to it, before he started to pull them out.

He pushed them back in as quickly as they'd come out, and the boy's hips sprang forward slightly, resulting in nothing but him hurting himself on the corner of the desk. Brian kissed the back of the Private's neck, grazing his teeth over the soft skin, and enjoying the feel of the shudder that passed through Zack's body.

"Stop moving." Brian ordered quietly against the boy's flesh.

Again, Zack obliged. Brian's fingers violated his hole again, sliding deeply into him, and Zack felt a sudden ripple of pleasure course through his body, causing his back to involuntarily arch upwards. High school health class told him that Brian had just hit his prostate, but he hadn't expected it to feel that good.

As though deciding whether or not that was enough preparation, Brian pulled his fingers out, quickly spitting into that hand. He expertly coated his cock in his saliva, before grabbing Zack's hips again. Once more, he felt the boy tense, but once again, he ignored it, and pushed his hips forward.

"Relax." he cooed, teasing Zack's hole with the head of his cock.

The younger man said nothing, but he was gripping the edge of the desk with such ferociousness that his knuckles were white. Brian pressed his lips to Zack's neck again, before thrusting his dick into the boy. Zack let out a groan, one that mostly consisted of pain, and Brian ignored it, continuing to plant hot kisses all over the back of the boy's neck.

It felt like it took forever for Brian's cock to be completely inside of Zack, and when it was, the younger man took quick breaths through his nose, afraid that if he opened his mouth, a lot of noises would escape him. After a second or two, Brian started to pull his dick out. As he pushed his cock back into Zack, he bit back a groan from the effort; it'd been a while since he'd had someone so tight, especially considering the fact that as of late, the whore, Private Sullivan, had been the only one giving out any action.

Squeezing one of Zack's hips lightly, he moved his other hand up to Zack's hair again, combing his fingers through it, and pulling on it lightly. He slid his cock into the younger man again, this time angling his movements. He had no trouble finding the boy's prostate a second time, the head of his cock jabbing into it roughly, and causing Zack's hips to spasm as he gave a short noise.

The pain that'd just been almost unbearable was masked with the feeling of Brian hitting his spot, and Zacky was unable to pretend he didn't like it. As his higher-up started to pull out of him again, he felt his own hips slowly moving backwards. He heard Brian let out a short laugh, but no words were exchanged, and Brian quickly thrust into the boy again.

Zack groaned once more as the older man's cock brushed against his prostate a second time. After that, Brian started up a rhythm, managing to hit Zack's spot with every thrust. The younger boy wasn't able to keep in the short whimper-like noises that he emitted, and he was pushing his hips backwards to meet the older man's movements.

Keeping that one hand on Zack's waist, Brian moved the other one back around to the boy's front, not hesitating to grab the younger man's hard cock. Zack let out a sharp breath, and his hips bucked forward at the contact of Brian's calloused fingers on the soft skin of his dick. The older man didn't mind the adolescent behavior though, he hated to sound like a freak, but he preferred it that way.

As he started to stroke Zack's cock quickly, he continued thrusting his own inside of the younger man. Both his hand and hip movements were almost completely in sync with each other, and the poor boy leaning over his desk seemed to be having trouble with what he wanted to do with himself -- whether or not he wanted to thrust forward into Brian's moving hand, or push backwards to meet the Sergeant Major's thrusting.

As Brian hit his prostate on a particularly rough thrust, he kept it pressed against the boy's sweet spot, causing Zack to spasm again, as he let out a whimpered moan. He cursed in a shaky breath, and his body had started to stiffen up.

Thankfully, Brian wasn't too far behind, and he groaned, thrusting forward sharply. Zack came almost without warning, with the exception of the high-pitched mewl that issued from his throat exactly a millisecond before it happened. As his load emptied into the older man's hand, his muscles clenched around Brian's cock, getting the older man to moan again.

Brian's hips rushed forward a few more times, before his own body tensed, and he felt himself reach his climax. He gave a throaty and drawn out groan before he himself came.

As soon as he'd caught his breath, he pulled out of the Private, immediately putting his now spent cock inside of his pants. Zack followed suit, straigtening to stand on shaky legs, as he fumbled to get his pants buttoned and zipped. Brian took a few deep breaths, letting out a content sigh afterwards, and he ran his fingers through his curly locks. Zack was turned to him, but his gaze was lowered. The rosy tint had returned to his cheeks.

"Go get rid of your cleaning materials." Brian said, in command again. "You're done for the night."

Zack nodded, and turned, slowly nearing the door. Brian grinned at the slight limp the boy already had; he loved his job.

"Private," he said again, and the kid turned to him. "This won't be the last time you end up bent over my desk, but if you talk back to me again, I'll make sure it's the last time you enjoy it." Zack quickly nodded, and Brian smiled. "Good," he said. "Now go."

Zack quickly obliged; there was no disobeying Sergeant Major Haner.

I don't know what I think about this one...
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