Title: Move Along
Author:
atrocious_xPairing: Johnny // Zacky
Rating: NC17 -- Maybe an R because it's kind of mild
Summary: [AU]. They became obsessed with each other; they were meant to be. [Lame Summary for a Lame Fic]
Disclaimer: I don't own anything, obviously.
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NOT MAKE ME CRY!!
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I loved it
It doesnt suck
It was beautiful
I wish someone would do that for me
As i worked silently in that little shop i'd probably work in for the rest of my life
Something beautiful would catch the eye of my soon to be lover
This girl would not be ordinary
but she would be perfect to him
And everyday he would walk by that shop just for her
not knowing that she too saw him and watched him from afar
Then one day they would meet and fall even more madly in love
And live together forever
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I'm glad you liked it.
And I'm sorry it made you cry!
But that's good that it made you cry, cause it means you thought it was that good. =P
Anyway.
Yeah.
I wish someone would do that for me too.
I'd do it for you. =P
♥
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I would also leave you secret love notes
Saying that i watched you everyday
And that i fell madly in love with you
At first sight!
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Ok so maybe, it's not quite as good as some of the other stuff you've done, but I still loved it. It's quite different to what you normally do, but it's good. This is one of those stories where you want the whole love at first sight thing to work out and them to live happy ever after together, but as soon as Matt made an appearance my heart sank and I knew it was not to be. But (in my deluded mind) I can be happy that they got to have each other that once, and I can let myself believe that while Zacky may be with Matt, he loves Johnny (yea I'm horribly deluded)
It sucks that you have writer's block, mainly becasue you keep us all sucked in with the sheer number of stories you have on the go. However, I do know that when you get your flow back, it's always worth it. If you want requests or anything to try and shake you out of it just holler, I can always come up with some idea
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(And I don't think you're deluded, darling).
And nahh, I don't need any requests (yet).
I have to work on this one for my friend Kim.
But I'm trying to finish some of my multi-chapters.
If you were reading In The Dark of the Night, I'm working on the next chapter of that one.
Cause that's gonna be a short one, and I want to finish it quickly.
♥
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In the Dark of the Night (I had to check which one that actually was) is one of your fics that sucks me in with the intriguing plot, so yay for a new chapter.
And like I said, I know from when you've lost your mojo in the past you always come back with a vengeance (lol if only) and you do always finish stories
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I'm glad you liked it.
And I didn't start it off thinking it was gonna be sad.
When I started it, it was gonna be all fluffy and good.
But I just had to turn it sad and dramatic.
But anyway.
Thanks again.
♥
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No. Not lame.
I don't just say this because I adore your writing.
No, no, not at all.
I loved it. And I'm all anti-loveatfirstsight.
But you made it believable. I spelled that wrong.
I apologize. But I really liked it. :)
Which leaves me to this: ILY. &&
Jimmy Pop wants to know if he can kiss you. ;)
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I love you.
I don't know what else to say, cause I'm really bad at replying to this kinda stuff. =P
But anyway.
I was gonna say something really fucked up, but it's a Bloodhound Gang song..ahh hell, I'll say it anyway.
Jimmy Pop can 'Kiss Me Where it Smells Funny'. =P
((I love that song)).
But thanks again, darling. ^___^
♥
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