circumstances

Oct 18, 2005 21:13

Here's a new song that I'm writing... its still in the works...
I don't have a Chorus for it yet!!!! gah.

..:::Circumstances:::..I know I’m dead without You ( Read more... )

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here's an idea daron134 October 19 2005, 02:57:20 UTC
here this is my idea just a sugestion

Chours:

I've lost my way
I can't make it trough
I need some help some guidance from you
I’ve been lead astray
Help me re-realize your ways
Help me lord not to drift away
For today
I’ve realized
The circumstances
I am asking for a chance
Show me the way for I know
You’re the one who won’t lead me away

^^ i wrote it after i read ur song i don't care if you use it or don't i am not getting anywhere haha well just thought i could help

love ya tOnZ-Daron

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Re: here's an idea ca77 October 19 2005, 03:20:09 UTC
I thought your adding chorus was very good!

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Re: here's an idea daron134 October 19 2005, 10:31:30 UTC
thank you -Daron

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rachaeleigh October 19 2005, 04:18:30 UTC
Dear David Pitman. I will buy your CD when it comes out in 2011. :)

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jesusfreak8487 October 19 2005, 06:54:45 UTC
Lovin it, man!

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Hey! hollister_chic1 October 19 2005, 22:12:23 UTC
Sounds awesome!

I <3 it!! AND YOU!

*God Bless always!*

Rachel

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awesome song awesomebassman October 31 2005, 03:33:49 UTC
great song, it completely desribes my life right now.

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Re: awesome song attackmyheart November 2 2005, 00:06:40 UTC
thanks, man. :)

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