Fic: Point of No Return (Kurogane x RSyaoran)

[atthla]

Title: Point of No Return
Author: Atthla
Fandom: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle
Pairing: Kurogane x RSyaoran
Warning: Angst. Spoilers.
Rating: T or PG-13
Disclaimer: CLAMP owns all.
Challenge: 30_romances #19. Home Body ; Bubbles ; Stay
Word Count: 3246

Summary: Dealing with guilt is never easy, especially when both of them are running away. Sequel to Oubliette

Comments

[dreamzworld]

Yes, you made Syaoran cry a lot, but I admit that that was so sweeettttt of him ^0^ I like the line " “Don’t leave me,” the kid’s voice was a wretched echo of a whisper - small, frail, shaky, like the whimpers of a scared, helpless animal. “Please”" and "Syaoran had caught up with him, trapping him in the circle of his arms. It shocked Kurogane so completely " I was screaming when I read that lines. And until now I still want to scream. >0When my image of Oubliette is Flower and Wind (strange huh? I am still feeling strange why I think of those which make that fic beautiful), my image of Point of No Return is , well, don't be surprised '^^ , ocean wave, black, dark night '^^ When I read this fic, motion of ocean wave in dark night was playing in my mind

[atthla]

Screaming is good, especially when it concerns Syaoran XD

Because the fic is supposed to be dark! I'm glad you got the right impression this time (I still can't understand about that flower-and-wind thing...)

Well, I think Kurogane understands that this Syaoran and that Syaoran are different. It's just that their being so alike makes things complicated.

As for what Syaoran thinks, hmm... let's save that for another fic XD Thank you for the comment! ^^

[dreamzworld]

It's about your userpic icon. I really like your Syaoran icon. I think that the words "IMPRISON ME" on that icon have appropriately explained this kind expression of Syaoran.

I have this feeling which Syaoran said to everyone that look him "Hey, I am Sexy" or "I can make your heart melt" or "Come here you. Come to me. Closer" or "You surely want me to be yours"

And Yes, you win, Syaoran! I feel that Syaoran... , you are Sexy >0< >0< and I want to keep you in my prison so just I that can always look your Sexy face. And your eyes, don't look at me with those eyes!! Cause your eyes make my heart melt and scream. Oh Nooooo .. >0< And don't give those eyes looking to anyone else. I am jealous... I want you to be just mine XD

OK, back to Normal mode '^^ I think that icon means possession and lust.

How about you? Are you agree with that opinion? How is your thinking about the "imprison me" words that you used?

[atthla]

Ohohohoho, someone noticed! Yes, that's why I made the icon. That expression on Syaoran's face can be interpreted in soooo many ways that I can't help myself XD Glad you approve!

Syaoran belongs to Kurogane and the clone but maybe you can ask him to share XD

[jlarinda]

Y-you know, ever since Infinity I've wanted Kuro/Syao fic with Syaoran being all broken and angsty and Kurogane comforting him.

;-; You wrote exactly the sort of fic I wanted ♥ I loved these so much!

[atthla]

Writing Syaoran all broken and angsty is what I do for a living XD There isn't enough Syaoran-torture fic around.

Glad you enjoy! ^^

[atthla]

I definitely will. There are way too few KuroSyao fics around.

Thank you for the comment!

[researchotaku]

This fic actually made me tear up.

Although I'm not a Kurogane/Syaoran fan, I do like your analysis of the whole "I'm Syaoran but not their Syaoran and now everyone hates me because their Syaoran went away but it's not my fault but it is and ARGH ANGST" element you wrote in.

I guess I should go back and review the other ones, huh?

[atthla]

Oh, wow, thank you for reviewing even though you're not a KuroSyao fan. But then again, who began as a KuroSyao fan? It's a very non-canon pairing XD

That will be very much appreciated! Although you may want to take care if you're not a yaoi fan ^^

[researchotaku]

thank you for reviewing even though you're not a KuroSyao fan

Well, it's easy to preach to the choir, right? So I thought it would be nice for you to hear that it's a good story even one doesn't actually ship them.

But then again, who began as a KuroSyao fan? It's a very non-canon pairing XD

Well, you've opened my mind to the possibility.

That will be very much appreciated! Although you may want to take care if you're not a yaoi fan

1. Don't worry, I read the first parts first actually. I just never reviewed them.

2. a. I like pretty much all types of pairings. It depends on the canon and the fic writers.
b. I actually found this series by reading your clonecest fic series first so I think I'll be okay. :)

[atthla]

I actually found this series by reading your clonecest fic series first so I think I'll be okay.

Woah, really? You read them? *blushes* I'm less sure of my clonecest series than this one, but yeah...