Beh.

[attorneyatlulz]

Ever get that sort of thing where you want to write something but you don't know exactly how to write it? well I'm kind of having that problem. I really need a way tostart this fanfic I'm writing. (No, not a secks one, but I may write that onthe sie, just for the lulz, but it will never see the light of day ever...unless you ask rather nicely

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[nightblade]

hmm...Just write about the Cabadath/DeFoe relationship. How it began, where it is going, and where it will go, what happened to Cabadath, and what happened to DeFoe as the idol got tossed into the ship's engine.

Cabadath and DeFoe had an uneasy relationship. You could write about how Cabadath was like a father to DeFoe; but as the years wore on, the relationship between them became an uneasy one.

I see Cabadath as a father to DeFoe at the beginning. Taking care of him, protecting him.

Maybe they spent too much time together in the idol?

Well, there you go. My suggestions. :)

[attorneyatlulz]

Yeah, that's probably how one will go,the other focusses most on my fancharacter. Perhaps a brief mention in the one I'm currently writing will be enough to spark that one. I'll have to run her through the Mary Sue Litmus Test a few times.