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Fic: "Discovering each other"

Jul 03, 2009 17:12

So, here is chapter two. :)

Title: Discovering each other
Part: 2/4
Rating: R (later though)
Pairing: Hermione/Fleur
Summary: Talking helps...
Word Count: 1980
Disclaimer: Still not mine. Well, as long as I can play with them... :D
A/N: Many thanks to
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Comments 9

bluemd July 3 2009, 18:42:44 UTC

Nicely done, once again. I think it's very true what Fleur explained about her thrall. She can never be sure if she is loved for it or for herself. Some food for thought for Hermione. I'm sure Fleur can show her she is not frigid in the least! lol! Until the next one, babe!

attributive_adj July 4 2009, 05:17:46 UTC

Thanks!

While I was reading the books, I was always wondering how Fleur did manage to know who was attracted to her for her looks or for herself. The books don't explain this at all. So, yeah, I think it would be pretty hard for her. I also thought she might appear snob and cold because of it, but she was all the opposite in reality. :)

Thanks again for commenting, hun.

zofbadfaith July 3 2009, 19:46:53 UTC

Yay, new chapter! :D No, wait. haha Not exactly new, but still <3 And Hermione was the first girl to tell Fleur she's beautiful <3 <3 :D

attributive_adj July 4 2009, 05:26:01 UTC

Hahaha, yeah, no wait this time, but since I'll be gone for the week-end... ;)
Ha, yeah, I like the idea of Hermione being the first girl to tell Fleur she's beautiful. I always thought of Hermione to be truthful and who also manages to know her own flaws and fault. :)

Thanks so much for the comment, sweetheart. :)

demoka July 4 2009, 10:33:20 UTC

You say that I've read this already, but where??? I'm here through hp_girlslash.... And when did you post this previously???

Still liking it!

BUT What's with Hermione saying "With pleasure" when Fleur asked if she wanted a cup of tea? It sounds REALLY strange. With pleasure is more of I'll do you a service phrase. Isn't it?

It's totally up to you of course, but referring to them as girls still seems odd. XP

attributive_adj July 5 2009, 20:01:50 UTC

hahaha, yeah, you did read it there:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3787786/1/Discovering_each_other
:D

I'm really glad you still like it. :)

Oh, really? I didn't know. Since I'm French, I still make some mistakes. You forgive me for that really, really terrible mistake? Please? ;)

You're right, I should refer to them as boys! XD

demoka July 6 2009, 07:29:15 UTC

ah... I see, you posted at FF.Net back in 07... XP Yes, no wonder I liked it so much then! XP

Eh, don't worry about mistakes, there were barely any from what I remember and well, everyone makes mistakes regardless of their first language. So yeah! At least you can get Fleur and all other French bits written perfectly! XP

zagury July 5 2009, 06:05:42 UTC

I like how Fleur has become more fluent in English, that's all rather helpful, and I swear I came back to this about three different times today, trying to read it, lol. :D

attributive_adj July 5 2009, 20:05:49 UTC

Hahahaha, yeah, I guess Fleur has to improve at some point, non? Although, to tell anyone, but it's because I'm lazy that I did it! (I think I totally forgot to write the accent in the future chapters as well! LOL)

I'm really glad you persisted and finally read it! And thanks for commenting. *special hug for you* :)