An Obedient Heart (Oneshot, Fleur/Hermione, PG)

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Title: An Obedient Heart

Pairings: Fleur/Bill, Fleur/Hermione

Rating: PG/PG-13?

Word Count: 1470

Warnings: None

Disclaimer: No money is being made off this and no copyright infringement is intended.

Summary: Fleur never thought the iron control she had maintained over her feelings since childhood would be broken. But she had not chosen this,

Comments

[zofbadfaith]

Aww, this is a cute piece :) A bit sad, I guess, but cute nonetheless :)

You really intend on keeping it a oneshot, though? :D I mean, this is a squee fangirl talking, but it'd be so nice to have a continuation :D

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Yay, thanks! I'm happy you like it! I quite like happy endings stuff (my romantic side I suppose), but I do like some sad or angsty stories too. It must come from all the Stephen King's books I used to read when I was a young teen! lol!

Mmmm, I do intend to keep it a oneshot. I don't have much time and I'm sooooo bad at updating that I'd rather write short enough stuff right now. I hope this will change some time, because I do enjoy writing. (and it helps me to improve my english and writing skills too).

Oh, and 'squee fangirl'??? OMG! You just made my day! (hum, again... you made my day again! lol! Sorry for the late reply)

*hugs*

[joeyseph]

my my, i liked it..
but dont tell any of my hermione/ginny shipper friends that..
:blush:
btw. lol'd at fleur having her water break a tiny bit early..

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Oh, I don't want you to have any problem with your Hermione/Ginny shipper friends!! *starts whispering* - I'm so happy you liked it! I do find this pairing cute. And I just couldn't have a pregnant Fleur stay all stoic to such a piece of news!! ;) - *stops whispering*
I do have another kind of story like that (you know the whole unrequited love thing) with Hermione/Ginny too, but unfortunately, it just doesn't want to write itself!! One day, maybe. :)

Thanks for commenting, and so sorry for the late reply, but I have been busy. :)

[la_dissonance]

Well, you already know what I think of this story, but it's worth saying again! I liiiiiiike it! The ending, first of all - I love what you've done with it, and it's amazing how it took such a little change to make it make sense to me. I love the subtle psychological twists - like, Hermione is maddeningly oblivious to Fleur's interest, but then, Fleur wouldn't let her know, would she? She's too good at controlling her feelings. I'm kind of getting curious to see where on earth this would go if it were continued, but that's what everyone else is bound to say, so I'll root for the keep-it-an-unresolved-ending camp. There's nothing quite like a good unrequited/unresolved femslash, now is there? (No, there is not! lol) Lots of love!!! :D

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Hi lovely

[la_dissonance]

Yay, surprise comment replies are fun to get :)

Definitely time to do something about the plot bunnies if they start insinuating themselves into your book... hehe! Especially if they're interesting ones with Fleur and Tonks making out :D (What a cool pairing!)