State of the Writing -- still a lot of editing

[atuinsails]

Still doing a lot of editing.  I finally finished going through all of the different critiques for Don't Drink the Water.  Hopefully, in the next week I will have a new draft that will need a lot more work, but will be a much better story than the one I have right now

Comments

[jokusmew]

Thanks for an idea, you sparked at thought from a angle I hadn’t given thoguht to yet. Now lets see if I can do something with it.