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Feb 23, 2009 15:08

Just a little teaser of my newest adventure.

demilena.
R.

"Come on, it will be fun!" Selena said, holding Demi's hand tightly.

"Selena, I don't want to do this.. not only does it sound the exact opposite of fun, but last time I checked, breaking into a state owned abandoned building is illegal. I just spent two weeks trying to get out of a fully ( Read more... )

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we_all_fall February 23 2009, 20:23:57 UTC
This is scary, and I'm reading this in the middle of the day.
lol
Good start. :)

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aubztastik February 23 2009, 22:54:30 UTC
Just wait. I have a couple things up my sleeve.

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xcinamonx February 23 2009, 20:53:03 UTC
Wow, this is definitely interesting.
Can't wait to read more :)

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magiclighting February 23 2009, 20:53:48 UTC
The start of this is really something.... I think you have set up something that makes you think, and gives you just enough of a lil scare. I like how Selena's just walks off, and leaves Demi there. I wasn't expecting that at all. You have my attention with this, I can;t wait to see what your going to have happen next.....

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rubybruiseday February 23 2009, 21:32:17 UTC
go go go write more!

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coffeecommunity February 23 2009, 21:35:41 UTC
Oh, this sounds interesting, and I know you'll make it into something amazing. Can't wait!

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