The General, The Colonel, their Child and His Mother ~ Teens ~ 4 of 4

[aud_iris]

Details, disclaimers and Part One here

Part Two here

Part Three here

Comments

[theyllek]

awwwwwwwwwwwww teh perfect! I can sleeps now with out nail biting to find out what happened!

excellent, mine friend very well done :)

[aud_iris]

Thank you very much for sticking with it xxxxx

[napalm_isis]

Oh that was just perfectly lovely! Well done Auddy! :D

[aud_iris]

Thank you - I hope it was okay - thank you for R&R

*cuddles*

[napalm_isis]

It's more than okay hon! I really enjoyed it from start to finish! :D

I don't read much (read: hardly any) fic these days but this was so worth it. Just like it's prequel. ;)

[triciabyrne1978]

You, dear, are evil for making me wait so long to read this!

I love you and love it!

And now I will be back to work....

[aud_iris]

Nooooooooo, not the eval Ork :(

*clings*

And THANK YOU for the R&R *kiss*

[triciabyrne1978]

You need to write more, dear.

Not necessarily more of this... just more in general.

[majorsamfan]

Love.
It’s the thing that carries the hope.

*wubs u*

*wubs ur fic*

*wubs u*

[aud_iris]

*wubs u bak*

And your cute lil' icon :D

[sjshipper]

**blinks**

Did I just spend the last hour and a half reading this whole series beginning to end?

Yes, but WOW was it worth it! I couldn't have gone to bed in the middle of finding out what happens!!

Also, maybe the people who most readily dislike babyfic haven't had babies. Because, like this little part here...

>>Waving away Sam’s concerns, he reassured her that Young Jonathan Jacob would indeed be satisfied and her breastmilk supply would not be compromised - ‘top ups’ assisted the successful establishment of breastfeeding rather than hindered it. He knew this to be true because he’d seen it proven on Oprah.>>

...had me dying, in stitches. Teal'c has said a lot of great stuff over the course of fanfiction, but "top ups" -- that's absolutely priceless.

[aud_iris]

Thank you very much for sticking it out to the end!

LOL on Teal'c - I mean to say the man has been around for sure ;D

I appreciate babyfic is much lampooned in fanfiction, but I had to do it, even for that one line alone *g*

[sjshipper]

You did it well, so kudos!