fic: avatar [sokka/toph]

[audentiae]

Title: Three Times Toph Was Engaged (& One Time She Wasn't)
Author: Alisa
Word Count: 2,707
Rating: PG/K+ (mentions of alcohol; also, kissing)
Summary: Three times Toph gets engaged and one time she doesn't.
Author's Notes: This took a painfully long time to finish, but it's finally done. It took a couple of versions and it might not have been very

Comments

[nuvolaluz]

I think my heart broke at the end of that. Beautiful. Probably the best tokka/sukka I've read in a long while.

[audentiae]

Thank you so much! It's an honor to be one of the best tokka/sukka stories you've read. ^_^

It also slightly surprised me to read that this was tokka/sukka, because the sukka slipped in without me really noticing! I think I just like the conflict it creates.

[nuvolaluz]

It does create an interesting angle, doesn't it??

I mean, we all know that there's somethign between Sokka and Suki in canon, but then we really don't know what Azula did to her. I'm really hoping she isn't dead because imagine what that would do to Sokka.

At the same time I want there to be some kind of confrontment on Toph's part - even accidental - that lets Sokka know her feelings. Though I get the feeling that he might already know? (Did you see the way he looked at her in Sokka's Master after she turned around, saying "I didn't care."?)

Yeah... definately the best I've read so far that ends on this side of the coin. Have you read Release?

[audentiae]

Oh, I would hate to see Suki dead. She's such an interesting character; she and Toph even share characteristics. They're both so independent, strong-willed, and, of course, they both have a soft spot for Sokka, even if Suki is more forward about her feelings. But I would really hate to see Suki gone (especially because of what it would do to Sokka -- just think of what he did when Azula even mentioned it!). That's why I'm so excited to see The Boiling Rock -- we have to get some answers

[pinguinolatino]

Wow. I was sure I knew where this was going, but man, the end was a surprise. It was just so sad and just...gah. I loved this. I just love it when you write Tokka, cause you write it so well. <3

[audentiae]

Aww, thank you so much!

I'm glad the ending was such a surprise! It's nice to know my plot's not too predictable. ^^

Invaderk does not approve either. :(

[audentiae]

*hugs*
*cowers*
*offers Sokka as penance*

[tai_eternity]

I... I just akda;a;kf;fs;fj;. How could you do that to me! You literally tore my heart out of my chest with that last one!

I always love reading any fics by you but your Three Times...(& One Time... Wasn't) are always my favorite and this one was the best yet. Just the way you right Toph and the heartbreaking Tokka, everything is stunning. I am so memming this!

[audentiae]

*hugs!*

Thank you so much! It's really amazing to know my writing can affect people so much! (What to do with the power... lol.)

I love writing in the 3(&1) format because it's like four separate oneshots in one little package. You can write one section, leave it for a while, and then come back to write some more. Plus you can be super creative and selective about what moments you want to use. It's just a fun way to explore the Tokka dynamic. =D

[arthoniel]

Aww... that's so sad, I nearly cried... but it's beautiful too... :)

[audentiae]

Thank you! ^_^