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jenny_evergreen March 25 2013, 21:22:40 UTC
Awww! Well done.

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kittenboo March 26 2013, 02:00:28 UTC
Very creative, I love how you weave the two worlds together.

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roina_arwen March 26 2013, 04:26:52 UTC
Very nice. A bit long, but well written. :)

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halfshellvenus March 26 2013, 05:12:46 UTC
I loved this interesting twist on the classic story, and the idea that Alice really belonged someplace else (really, anywhere else) than the life she'd slowly been backed into.

The smugness of David and gleefulness of his dreadful children as they can't wait to tell her they've murdered her beloved cat while she was gone... *shudders* Vivid and irrevocably awful.

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lilycobalt March 26 2013, 18:39:10 UTC
I like the idea of a modern-day Alice who's lost her way. Come on! Go back!

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