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audreybuttercup

LJ Idol Exhibit A-Shenanigans

Feb 05, 2013 15:45

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myrna_bird February 5 2013, 23:30:35 UTC

I love love love this! I am a such a Tinkerbell nut that anything with HER in it will get big points with me. But this is a fascinating take on the childrens classic with bringing in all the horrific villains we love to hate. Very good story and writing! :)

audreybuttercup February 6 2013, 15:24:49 UTC

Thank you!! I love her too, and the whole Neverland saga. Those stories (and Pooh, I'm a sucker for Pooh) are some of my favorites. Thank you so much for the comment, I was very worried about the writing.

myrna_bird February 6 2013, 23:36:54 UTC

It sure pleased me. I think it was wonderful story telling!

tatdatcm February 6 2013, 05:32:23 UTC

Loved this so much. I really liked the play of the fairy tale hero, all Disney-fied vs. the modern villains and how different they were. Even when Tink is using bad language it's no where near what we hear in more modern movies/stories/fairy tales. Ooh, and then the end where you imply a nefarious end perpetrated by the new comers - just delicious! A great use of the prompt.

audreybuttercup February 6 2013, 22:38:12 UTC

:grin: Thank you so much. I tried to stay as true to the Tink from my imagination as I could, even with the language. I figure being a fairy running around with a young boy they're going to use some but it would be harmless/funny words rather than insulting or painful. I had fun with that ending too. What are they cooking...? :D

amazingwriter23 February 6 2013, 06:12:18 UTC

Great take on the topic. I love these characters! AW

audreybuttercup February 6 2013, 22:38:39 UTC

Thank you! Peter and Tink are two of my favorites.

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audreybuttercup February 6 2013, 22:39:34 UTC

Thank you! :laughs: Kind of feels like one of those swirly Hershey's Kisses doesn't it, light and dark. You never know what yer gonna get. :D

baxaphobia February 6 2013, 21:55:57 UTC

Fabulous story! poor Peter! And I learned some new curse words in the process! Amazing what one learns in Idol!(sloppy pap smear?)

audreybuttercup February 6 2013, 22:40:23 UTC

*nodnodnod* HOLY sloppy pap smear. :grin: My personal favorite was carrotballs. I think that's going to be the new "curse word" in our family now. :smiles

baxaphobia February 6 2013, 22:46:26 UTC

Yes. I might have to find a way to use that one! ahahahaha