Fell Through The Ice -- Charlie Drabbles

[audreyii_fic]

Title: Fell Through The Ice (Incomplete Charlie Drabbles)
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: M
Characters: Swan Family, Black Family, Clearwater Family
Genre: Humor/Angst
Warnings: Language. Heartfail.

Summary:
Thoughts on Charlie's life.

Notes:
The Twilight Illustrated Guide comes out today (coinciding with the sinking of the

Comments

June 2004

[audreyii_fic]

"You might not want to go in there," Jacob warns when you get out of the cruiser. The boy is fourteen now (how did that happen?); his voice has dropped but he's still short. At the moment -- sitting on the front steps of his porch, sharp elbows resting on knees, round chin resting on palm -- he looks younger than he is. "Dad's not in a good mood

Re: June 2004

[lsjcandy]

Always had problems with this. Twilight kinda ruined my image "true, perfect love" for me, even in books (and then imagine I'm fan of HP where practically everything impossible is made possible). I can't imagine you'd throw college away -- then try to find something in between goddamnit instead of living on an island and just... Gah. Bella and Rebecca are a lot like each other, (I see them both as mother-like and caring, and throwing college away for their "true loves"...), no wonder I'm freaking out here about Becca.

Sorry for the rant. You know I love your writing.

Re: June 2004

[audreyii_fic]

Oh, yeah. While I've never thought too hard about Rebecca and her husband's relationship... canon-wise, the only thing that makes sense is a whirlwind romance. We know she'd just graduated from college and we know she moved to Hawaii and we know she'd given up a scholarship and no one liked that. The only thing that made sense was an elopement.

Frankly, I don't think any of the Black kids wound up overwhelmingly stable. I think they missed their mom and Billy never really managed to give them the centeredness they needed after that. I think Rebecca wanted to make her own family since hers didn't feel like one anymore.

Re: June 2004

[lsjcandy]

That's a logical option... Though I still don't forgive Rebecca. Too stubborn for that. (Also, I'm pissed because I'm gonna miss watching Glee with my sister and stepmother tonight. Why couldn't my stepmother's birthday be tomorrow?! So I'm stubborn and pissed anyway. Sorry Beccs.)

Re: June 2004

[lulu_honey]

:( Rachel is all alone now. That's got to sting.

Re: June 2004

[audreyii_fic]

Rachel got screwed in all this, too. Fuck, they all got screwed. *snorgles Blacks and Swans and Clearwaters*

Re: June 2004

[ronjacobfan]

I loved this addition. I love that you're developing not just Charlie, but the Black family through Charlie's eyes. You're awesome.

Re: June 2004

[audreyii_fic]

There would've been lots of Black family stuff, since I sort of subscribe to the belief that Charlie would've been the one making the trains run on time for awhile after Sarah's death. (Harry and Sue, too, but they had their own little kids to take care of.) Which naturally adds to Charlie's attachment to Jacob, which later when Bella stomps on him... though I expected to end the drabbles at Harry's death, so we wouldn't have to watch an excess of stomping.

Re: June 2004

[sleepy_sheep683]

"Which naturally adds to Charlie's attachment to Jacob, which later when Bella stomps on him... "

I always thought Meyer missed the mark a bit here. Charlie knows Jacob better than he knows his own daughter; he's watched him grow up and been in his life so regularly... that whole escapade would have been complicated for him.

Re: June 2004

[audreyii_fic]

Yeah. It's like when friends date ("This is fantastic as long as they never break up and unbalance the whole social circle!") except much, much worse.