Comments | augmenti: crossover; Say goodbye (to the world you thought you lived in).; jiyeon/iu.

augmenti

crossover; Say goodbye (to the world you thought you lived in).; jiyeon/iu.

Jul 15, 2012 15:57

Say goodbye (to the world you thought you lived in).
Jieun got on the wrong car one day, and discovered that not everything in her world was as it seemed.
2,700 words. pg.

( His large legs crushed a bush as he stomped around. )

l: 1000——5000 w, p: jiyeon/iu, p: crossover, f: iu, f: t-ara

Comments 5

anonymous July 15 2012, 21:19:05 UTC

I spy a little day by day in here...I don't know how but somehow I do and I freaking love it.

The theme was really interesting and because you put Jiyeon and IU in, it was interesting to see how Jieun reacts and thinks of Alien Jiyeon. It's a new kind of fic; I'm not usually one for these kinds of plot but wow. This one was just beautiful.

augmenti July 16 2012, 00:48:07 UTC

really? that's interesting! i wasn't sure how well an au like this would go over, or how well i'd be able to write it, but i really wanted to give it a shot and stretch my wings so i'm glad you enjoyed it!

miwa_harmony July 16 2012, 04:09:36 UTC

the last paragraph really got me :) i think this was a great idea but maybe a bit too dense for such a short fic? not that it was bad though, because it was really enjoyable and creative! thanks for sharing and good job!

augmenti July 16 2012, 15:38:55 UTC

oh it is definitely dense and in horrible need of expansion, but by the time i realized it, it was too late to write something else for the challenge. thank you though! i'm glad you liked it even with all the heavy-handedness ♥

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augmenti July 16 2012, 15:40:42 UTC

thank you! when i thought up the plot bunny, i thought i might be able to get away with writing it in the short time of the challenge but then i realized very quickly that it wasn't about to happen. i desperately want to expand it, and i'm so glad you like it♥ you are always so nice to me ;~;