Tell Me: Chapter Foour

Nov 17, 2004 02:56

Here is the fourth chapter of Tell Me.

I am working on Luckiest Man and it should be out soon.

Tell Me

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raffyv November 21 2004, 03:30:40 UTC
“Yes,” moaned dream Hermione as she wrapped her arms around Draco’s back and urged him to ride her harder and faster. Hermione struggled to wake up as she dreamt about them moving against each other until they came together with gasping cries and heart stopping pleasure.

Mmmm… I can‘t wait for Hermione’s dream to become a reality!
... )

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aureliaflint November 30 2004, 10:00:22 UTC
I believe at this point it is Draco's dream as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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raffyv November 30 2004, 10:20:35 UTC
I'm sure it is!
... )

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kataclysmic November 25 2004, 21:37:27 UTC
Have just caught up with all four chapters of this fic, and I must say, I'm very impressed... characterization is great, as is the slow(ish) progression of their attraction.

Can't wait to read more!

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aureliaflint November 30 2004, 10:01:28 UTC
Thank-you. I want to make their developing relationship seem real so it has to go slow at first.

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julesndairyland November 26 2004, 21:40:54 UTC
All I can say is Yummy!
Can't wait for the real fun between Draco & Hermione to begin.
More please soon!

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aureliaflint November 30 2004, 09:59:17 UTC
I am working on a chapter as we speak. Thank-you for reading and commenting.

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anonymous November 27 2004, 19:43:31 UTC
Great chapter! Loved the tension in Hermione and Draco's encounter in Ravenclaw Tower. And the flashback was so hot and sensual! As well as Hermione's dream. When is it going to come true? ;-) I think I'm beginning to feel as impatient as Draco, lol. Full of anticipation, lol.

AriadneElda

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aureliaflint November 30 2004, 09:58:44 UTC
Yes, Draco is very impatient. But good things come to thoses who wait.

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moonjameskitten January 7 2006, 13:03:05 UTC
Oh my ! this is a fantastic chapter ! and Draco to end it was...wooww! sorry can't find words,yet !
..'passionate Draco Malfoy' : for sure !
I really love your characterization of Hermione, very good balance between dark and light ! between romantic and erotic!

i'm rushing to the next chapter, right now !

Moonie
xx

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